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If I write by hand, that one piece of information that I'm trying to note, will be gone forever. So I always volunteer myself to take the notes for the whole group.

I would rather burn everything down than having to touch a cockroach.

I hate you.

Cockroaches.

Bro cooked a perfect nothing burger.

"Bud, why are you talking to a mirror?"

I second this. I used to, and still read garbage mtl, so my brain doesn't register tenses anymore. Remember kids, don't read mtl if you want to preserve your English.

I read the first two chapters. Your story lacks depth, basically. The characters seemed shallow, and progression ultimately didn't make much sense. But, I understand. I've read both kuma and the lazy vampire before after all. I see a lot of resemblances of those two in your story. With that in...

I read the first chapter. There's two main problems I have with your writing. Firstly, there are scenes that had absolutely zero buildup, which left me kinda disappointed. For example, when the girl with scales healed the baby: The girl touched the baby with a single finger, and in an instant...

I blame those cute chibi arts. I couldn't focus on the guide.

Nah bro I'd rather fight her to death. Or not, considering that she could literally erase me with her abilities. I'll take the broken arm.

I'll take the 1 billion even if I don't get married to one of the sisters. I hate physical contact with people, so being a dog would be nightmare fuel.

There's this amazing song I've been listening to for a long time already. And there's a part where she sings ''Cause I'm your whole''. But I've always heard 'whole' as 'hoe', cause I was a tiny brain guy from a non English speaking country. One time I discovered what 'hoe' might mean, and I've...

I would like to see that.

Ah yes, as a normal elf with a futa harem. But I'll have the ability to craft guns and use magic though, that's a plus for sure...

I read the first four chapters. It was good. I didn't notice anything bad about your writing. The characters felt a bit odd at time, but I don't mind it, fits for a comedy. Overall, an interesting start. Good luck writing.

Carefully aim a pistol outside when you run over the five guys. You should be able to shoot the one guy on the other track. Thus completing your mission.

None. All of the ones that you saw? Fakes. I burned all the witches a while ago already, so.

The Character I Created Is Obsessed With Me It is machine translated, so go ahead with precautions. I didn't read beyond chapter 6 either, so I don't know if it's good or not.

I was sleepwriting when my first chapter happened. So it was hot garbage, and still is. But I've rewritten it, just to lessen the cringe as much as possible. You grow as you write, and the old stuff might not meet your standard anymore. So if you feel like you need to rewrite, just do it. Don't...