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  1. Kalliel

    Favorite piece of video game sountrack of all time

    M2U, the man is a god. The M trio sounds so goddamn good. Not to mention his whole section in Deemo. Rigel theatre's music is also very good. I especially love Lurie.
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    Bugs Is the Latest Series tab bugged?

    That's unlucky. Or the algorithm just prefers that guy's novel. I don't know. :blob_hide:
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    The Island

    Yeah, no. I'll just surrender if the people there are all hot woman.
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    Are You Dark Mode User?

    The war has never ended. We're here again, dark mode vs light mode. More like night mode vs flashbang.
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    Anti-Chocolate Thread 21.10-20.11

    It's time for an One Punch Man workout...! You can literally bend space-time after doing it for a few years. The only side effect is that you'll be bald. But who cares about that? Seriously though, good luck.
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    Inadvertent grooming novels

    Yes. 'I raised Snow White!' The protagonist as the evil stepmom raised Snow White since she was 6, and now, as of the latest chapter, Snow White has already gone yandere. She kidnapped the protagonist and locked her in her room. Now, I don't really feel anything about this, because, you know...
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    Stepmother works

    If you're into yuri, then I'll definitely recommend 'I raised Snow White!'. (Not) Evil stepmom gets leashed by yandere Snow White. I love it. It is machine translated though, so...
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    Royal Road has their app. Where is ScribbleHub's?

    Tony, you madlad. Want some cookies?:blob_cookie::blob_cookie::blob_cookie:
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    Very bad free feedback thread.

    I read the first three chapters. It was surprisingly fine. Now, there are still a few grammar mistakes here and there, this is an example: "We apologize, ma'am. Due to last year's massive purchases, we couldn't renew our contract with the supplier, resulting in a shortage," a staff member...
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    Very bad free feedback thread.

    I read the first two chapters of the second one. It was good. The writing is decent enough, the premise is interesting. Yeah, no. I have no complain, really. Other than maybe decrease the paragraph spacing a bit... That's just my preference, not really a complain. I read the first three...
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    do you ever feel like everybody's playing along

    I read this a total of three times, and I still don't get what you're trying to say. Ideas and emotions must have existed first, otherwise we couldn't define them in words, no? Or am I tripping...
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    I approach you again, this time I give u cookie(s) ?

    If it ain't first-class vanilla milk cookies hazelnut wafers covered in gold leafs, I will not take it.
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    Review my few of my chapter

    I a lot of the time end my chapters with jokes, or, cliffhangers. It really doesn't take much work, believe me.
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    Very bad free feedback thread.

    I read the first two chapters. Now, your writing is neat. But I did notice some occasional missing stuff here and there. Very minor complain though. Aside from that, I don't really have anything to say about the story. The thing is, this genre does not interest me personally, so I can't comment...
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    Very bad free feedback thread.

    Sorry, I couldn't get pass chapter one. It was painful to read. Let me go through some of the things I didn't like. Firstly. While Zenon cleaned the attic, a ball of light floated beside him—Globus Lucis. This spell was as fundamental as they came, accessible to anyone with even a basic...
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    What songs are you listening to?

    This has no reason to go this hard. I love it.
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    How to remove a bad review from a hater.

    No problem. I now have time for reviews, unlike the past week...!
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    How to remove a bad review from a hater.

    I feel called out. Let me go review the ones that I haven't touch...
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    How to deal with perfectionism?

    Either don't bother, or think that it's perfect already. Get good.
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    Does protagonist of a combat story need to be the best at everything?

    And I don't like mental illnesses. That's why I don't make any of my characters good at everything. Besides, it would just be boring. ...Not like my smut ass story has any plot to begin with.
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