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I read the first 10 chapters of your work. This is probably my favorite in this thread so far. The premise and characters are all pretty good, the pacing is also very nice. About your writing. Now, I don't have any major problem with it, except for one thing. The whole part about the...

I would apologize.

Equilibrium.

1. At one point, I was pretty dissatisfied with the works in the genres that I read. 2. I had ideas in my head, and wanted them to become stories. And I have to say, Spider is probably my favorite story so far, not counting Steins;Gate. But the ending for the web novel was pure garbage. So many...

Yeah, I think it's just you.

3k word is fine, I think. I thought it was like 5 6k.

If the infodumping lasts for a few chapters straight, then don't. No matter how good the character interactions or whatnots you add in, I wouldn't like it. Unless the info is really, really interesting. Do it by flashbacks instead.

I don't even want to read the premise...

I mean, that's true. The dog is definitely cleaner.

You should've made all the options you then, that'll garner a hundred reacts at least.

I mean... You kinda deserve them.

With each 'who is the -----st SHF member', a new war happens. I love it.

Not the best, but it'll do for now.

What are you even on about. :sweat_smile:

Good luck!

No, seriously though. I just throw my story with a single chapter on so that I can figure the tags out, and I prefer writing and saving drafts on SH. Like what I did with my second story. I wrote a 700 words prologue and threw it on here, people will read if they want to read. That was my...

Cause cats do lick themselves to clean often, and that is not 'washed', so...

Dream

I don't love you, but I agree that Wicked Fate and Mare Maris are amazing. On that note, why don't you listen to this piece by aaaa: While it's not a game OST, I don't think, it is based on a few different M2U songs. And I have like, 6 other game OST, do you want to hear them?