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I don't. Life is already depressing enough, no need to make my characters suffer too. Except the bad ones, of course.

Take it with a grain of salt, I am definitely not a good reader, so if the first chapter of a series is not good enough for me, I'll lose interest immediately. Still, good luck with your writing.

Nah, why would you do that smh. Conflict in the Middle East is more fun.

I read the first 12? 13? chapters. It was hella interesting. And I mean it. Normally I would not read stories like this, I prefer more fun and lighthearted stories. But, this one got me pretty hooked in. The writing was good, I have no complain. The characters felt interesting enough, and they...

I read the first chapter. It was confusing. Now, your storytelling is fine, I don't have any problem with that. Just, you don't need to make the character names or normal words stand out, we can see them just fine. Onto the main problem. The characters don't make sense. Why did Sunja suddenly...

''Now, I'm not an expert on recognizing faces, but he looks kinda old, idk, probably still younger than my father, though.'' Is what my main character would say about a random old man. Her father is an elf, by the way.

Sorry about that rant, I was overdosing on ketamine back then. To answer your question, I was reading on my laptop. I don't actually know about other readers, but I found it to be really hard on my eyes. I do think that chopping them even more won't do any harm. And, you are definitely over...

I did consider using AI for like, three seconds. But ultimately I decided not to. Simply because I think my readers enjoy consuming my choppy and crude sentences more than sophisticated stuff.

So, my caveman brain just found out that you can actually use an AI software to have it check your writing, and, improve it. I tried using DeepL Writing on one of my chapters, and it did come up with some more sophisticated writing than me, obviously. The thing is, I feel like it also killed a...

Second this.

This is currently more interesting than a lot of novels I've read.

I read the first two chapters. Now, let's get right onto the goods first. Your descriptions of things are really good, they read very natural, no drawn out, no crude either. Mostly good grammar, I could only noticed one or two mistakes. The main problem I have with this, is that the main...

This is such a bruh moment, I was the only one who voted one. Besides 5, of course.

When I'm out of ideas. When I do have ideas though, I could dish out a thousand words per hour easily.

He feels like a child, is what I meant. Actually, the whole story is like a very childish power fantasy. And as for Grid, I don't think I have the time to read that much chapters anymore, so I'll just take your words for it.

A dude.

Yeah no, Arthur is very cringe. He's like, exceptionally 'teenager' than most teenagers, despite being a whole king the his past life. The scenarios and the way the plot moves might contribute to the cringe a lot though, if you know what I mean. And, I might be wrong about Grid, I've only read...

You just made me lost all respect towards you. Repent, sinner. Those are the two most cringe MCs I've ever seen.

Well, crap.

First time I've heard about a soup named Campbell.