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  1. Kalliel

    Recommendations Who is the most badass web novel protagonist?

    For real though, I'd say Dowd Campbell from [Fated to Be Loved by Villains]. The man is a legend. He's crazy, unhinged, bold, badass, and somehow is a good person at the same time. Just casually walking on a strand of rice noodles, not even a rope, between a bunch of yandere demon bosses who can...
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    help this great witch choose a vict- friend

    Whaat, he's cute though, give him a chance.
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    help this great witch choose a vict- friend

    5 for me I'd say, I feel like it would be very entertaining. The interactions between a witch and [REDACTED] are something I've not seen a lot. Especially, I'm curious about how you would deal with [INSUFFICIENT DATA] of [REDACTED]. And I mean, it has the ability to [CORRUPTED FILE], so will...
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    I hate you Anon

    I hate you Anon
  5. Kalliel

    Discuss: Eastern Asia culture

    The food is amazing.
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    What's your popular opinion?

    Witch hunt was great, that stuff is fire. Literally.
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    What's your unpopular opinion?

    ''You are probably right, granny. I shouldn't be fighting here, there's still my characters waiting for me at home.'' I said, returning to my normal state. Welp, not fighting is always better, I guess. ''Well then, adios''
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    What's your unpopular opinion?

    Dragging my left foot backward, I'm trying to imitate the stance of taekwondo, which I had the chance to learn 4 years ago. I only followed the class for like a month though. Regardless, I now need to fight this... Actually, what even is she? I know that she is a she, but I honestly don't know...
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    What's your unpopular opinion?

    Wait, what does that mean again?
  10. Kalliel

    What's your unpopular opinion?

    Fight me lady.
  11. Kalliel

    What's your unpopular opinion?

    And Vampires were created by humans, so by that logic, you're saying that no vampire character is good.
  12. Kalliel

    What's your unpopular opinion?

    I am a pervert too. I'd even say my logic is flawless. So, I love girls. And in yuri, you have two girls, so double the love. Easy.
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    What's your unpopular opinion?

    Yuri is good.
  14. Kalliel

    Very bad free feedback thread.

    I read the first three chapters. First thing first, chapter one was interesting, but the timeskip at the end of it felt awkward. It's too sudden, out of nowhere. And, I lost a lot of interest over the next two chapters. Basically very little happened. I could even say that it was unnecessarily...
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    Very bad free feedback thread.

    I read the first two chapters. You're pretty good at giving information, I could easily understand what was going on and how the characters were. And, the premise itself is interesting. Now, I have two main complains about this. Firstly, there's still some occasional grammar mistakes and missing...
  16. Kalliel

    Very bad free feedback thread.

    I've noticed throughout my time as a reader. When I read a really long paragraph, especially on mobile, it's harder to focus on the story because I also need to keep track of which line of text I am on. But it might just be a me problem, and a skill issue.
  17. Kalliel

    Very bad free feedback thread.

    I read the first five chapters. This one is actually interesting, I can tell that you put a lot of effort into this. Now, I don't actually have the time to read much anymore because I've started writing, so unfortunately I won't be able to know what would happen next. But I'm sure you would do...
  18. Kalliel

    Very bad free feedback thread.

    It's fine, I didn't hate it at all, just not what I would read normally.
  19. Kalliel

    Very bad free feedback thread.

    What do you mean by that? I get a chapter one review from you or the other way around?
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