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I've only presented the surface or the story's packaging in the form of tropes. Beneath the narrative's surface lies a subtext with profound thematic depth, even touching on sensitive topics. Of course, that's beyond the scope of this thread. I'd simply like to hear other authors' opinions...

Yandere is just a plot device. Imagine an OP older sister starting a war, killing hundreds of thousands, even millions, only to find her sister hiding from her.

My protagonist is female (I rarely write male protagonists). Also, the relationship between the antagonist and protagonist isn't based on lust, more like an overprotective older sister who won't hesitate to eliminate any potential threats to their relationship.

She's not just it... she's more like a yandere sister who wouldn't hesitate to burn the world to find MC.

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What do you think about yandere villainess as an antagonist to the protagonist?

What do you think about yandere villainess as an antagonist to the protagonist?

I'm not forbidding you from review swaps, promotions, or anything like that. You're free to promote your work as long as it's within the rules. But I have different priorities.

Personally, I also enjoyed your narration (the narrator's voice is hilarious). It felt like a stand-up comedian telling jokes in front of me. You have a good comedic foundation. However, if you narrated the comedy scenes more immersively, readers might be even more entertained. They might not...

I once received an invitation from a dark fantasy group there to "support each other" against the dominance of the LitRPG genre. But I declined, or rather, I didn't respond. It may be common there, but I have no intention of getting involved in drama just to attract readers. I prefer to focus on...

IRL, when the name of someone you know is mentioned, your mind tends to conjure up a whole person with appearance, personality, background, and relationships. But when a stranger's name is mentioned, you tend to tilt your head, without thinking of a specific person. Similarly, in a fictional...

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Please try mine, dude. Thanks. https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/139758/gifts-from-detective-clara/chapter/2755364/vol-1-chapter-1-prologue-a-detective-girl-with

I'm not interested in being a moderator/ admin... and I've never reported translated fiction either. I'd rather be a free member. :blob_melt:

Well, I've read chapter 7. My impression... this chapter is quite solid compared to the previous chapters. The narrative uses a limited third POV following Aiko to narrate the travel scenes in the town square, library, flashbacks from the diary and church. Overall, as a reader, I didn't feel...

Thanks for your honest feedback, dude. Did you feel depressed after finishing the chapter?! :blob_aww: Sorry, but I'm both happy and sympathetic to you. If you felt sad, then this chapter was a successful emotional immersion. Again, I appreciate your honesty. :blob_salute: Regards.