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(Sigh) So you think I banned you?! Account or fiction? I don't know. You're really good at thinking I have the authority to do it. I'm guessing if your fiction was banned, it's because your content has a foreign language (Arabic) which violates the site's guidelines (content must be in...

Dude, I'm just a member here. How did you conclude I'm an admin?! :blob_teary:

(Sigh) You don't have to worry about how your work will be judged. In fact, readers have their own perceptions. You can't control their minds. As long as you don't cheat, why you worry? Account banned?! You can contact the administrator through contact us. Keep it simple! Don't complicate...

It's hard to prove who's right or wrong based solely on individual opinions. Well, let's say I believe you. But do you have any intention of seriously learning to write fiction? If the formatting is still a mess, how can I care anymore after you ignore the feedback you receive?! I just...

If you are sleepy and hungry at the same time, which do you do: (1) eat first then sleep, or (2) sleep first then eat?

You need to back up your claims. At the very least, revise your previous chapters and consider the feedback you've received. Don't be lazy about editing. Writing fiction isn't a one-time endeavor. Make your work readable, even for casual readers. I won't touch your manuscript again until you...

I'll wait for his response for clarification. I've been reviewing his manuscript without prejudice, but I haven't seen any real changes regarding the text or formatting. And now... I'm surprised that OP is asking for other chapters to be reviewed. You @Dani007 should appreciate your...

As an art, most (not all) authors agree that fiction is a form of self-expression.

I wanted to write cultivation fiction. A week later... I wanted to write mystery fiction. Now... I want writing a vampire hunter fantasy. Dude, are you going to write all genres and tropes?

What I seek from fiction is the authenticity of the emotional experience. If I read comedy, I want to laugh. If I read fantasy, I want to feel something magical. If I read SoL, I want to relax. This is the emotional experience.

Well, in terms of storytelling, your narrative is quite solid. You apply the principle of "show it, don't tell it" quite well. This narrative is already quite good above average for a web novel, even reaching the level of a light novel ready for publication. But if you want to make your...

In line with the question above, I'd like to hear your thoughts. There are no right or wrong answers here, just sharing your opinions.

Whatever prose that you develop, it's best to focus on your story. Avoid purple prose, prose that's overly flowery, poetic, or full of metaphors, to the point where the reader can't understand your scenes.

I felt like Deron was awkward at the beginning of the chapter. He was portrayed identity confusion (amnesia, perhaps?). But midway through the chapter, he somehow adapted to the other bandits as if he knew them well (or did). If Deron (or whoever the possessing soul was) had truly lost his...

Dude, honestly... I'm having a hard time visualizing your scenes. Your narrative is full of verbs piled up in a compound sentence. Honestly, this is very tiring for me as a causal reader. I assumed you were narrating the scene through compound sentences with multiple verbs so that the reader's...

Honestly... I'm confused by your question. What kind of feedback are you looking for? If you're looking for feedback on taste, whether the story is funny, etc, you should ask your readers. They're the ones who enjoy your fiction. If you ask other authors here, they'll likely dissect your...

Use timelines of the series:

Dude, I’ve read the first three chapters. And I’ll say this honestly… sorry, but your narration is still vague, which makes the scenes difficult to visualize—at least based on my reading experience. In terms of story premise, your fiction may have some fairly interesting dark fantasy elements...

Done, dude.

You can use a cliffhanger ending to cut off your chapters. Cut the chapter at a crucial or pivotal moment. This will keep the reader's curiosity piqued, making them more likely to press the next button.