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Dude/sis... sorry, I stopped reading here. The reason? This is a moral lecture. Opening a scene with a moral lecture is the last option in narrating the opening scene. Why? As a reader, I don't reject the moral message of the story. But the interpretation of the moral message should be done by...

The OP is actually trying to convey the character's emotions through subtle emotion, using dialogue and body language (showing). That's the golden rule. But perhaps the narrative clues to the emotions aren't strong enough, leaving the reader confused. The solution is to emphasize body language...

Don't be afraid to make mistakes; humans learn from them. Don't worry too much about writing mistakes; every writer starts with a single ink-filled scribble, like the name of this website.

Let the melody of rain be a lullaby...

I feel like this thread is just a way to show off (character) trauma. It reminds me of the Spongebob Salty Spitoon meme...

Dude... this time I'm not judging your narrative quality objectively, I'm purely giving a preference assessment regarding the hook of the prologue piece. This might be harsh... the rating is 1/5. Reason: I'm confused about what this prologue is about? Why does the narrator say he's dead? Is...

The first POV inherently acts as an unreliable narrator. The narrative camera uses the character's perspective directly to perceive their world. You cannot know the emotions and thoughts of other characters. Even if the "I" provides interpretations regarding other characters, that information...

The RR algorithm differs from SH. SH relies more on visibility and accessibility to drive engagement. RR, on the other hand, relies more on recommendation system algorithms, either through linking between fiction or paid promotion. In RR, visibility when releasing fiction only lasts a few...

Well, I just read your latest chapter in one go. My overall impression is that, as a first POV, your narrative successfully transformed me into 'Aiko'. I could feel her fear, anxiety, and sadness through her thoughts, senses, and psychological reactions. Your narrative is rich in sensory...

Motherhood, sisterhood in suffering, and a post-apocalyptic amnesiac world: (1) Motherhood is the center of gravity of the story. My story centers on the relationship between a mother and a little daughter where the mother is the main protagonist who tries to live peacefully after her dark...

Let's make a magical girl cult in SHF. But don't invite @Envylope , her envy has burned half the world.

April 1st won't make me lie to myself about not writing. Do I write or not?

Dude... how can you make a 'yes' and a 'no' choice be chosen at the same time?

@Rachel_Leia_Cole another author wrote me like your work.

Does this story have a hook? Well, as a reader, I would be drawn to the part I quoted in your fiction premise. My heart would be drawn to the 'caring for family' theme. Sibling affection is a universal human emotion, especially for those who have a good relationship with their younger siblings...