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  1. Eldoria

    What's the worst character you ever made?

    I rarely write shallow 1D or 2D characters, but sometimes I do for narrative purposes. For example, I narrate a pair of fugitive slave traders who are vulgar, rude, and dirty to show how dark the world is. Interestingly, these characters generally only appear briefly before eventually dying...
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    Which is more difficult: Writing a new chapter or rewriting an old chapter with a more immersive...

    Which is more difficult: Writing a new chapter or rewriting an old chapter with a more immersive approach?
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    Targeted Story Feedback Thread (READ THE NOTE)

    Hello, dude. I'm currently looking for feedback on handling sensitive content centered on a single character. My specific questions I'm asking include: What did you feel when you read (then closed) the chapter? What thematic depth was the chapter? What was the characterization of Captain...
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    Feedback for my novel "Hyoren Enjo Journey on Another World". And how should i proceed with chapter length.

    Your approach is very similar to mine. It's nice to find other members with a similar approach.
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    Clickbait

    Clickbait
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    You know... the characters who are reluctant to get their hands dirty killing bad guys as common...

    You know... the characters who are reluctant to get their hands dirty killing bad guys as common in shounen and superheroes protagonists.
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    Therefore, characters may act irrationally, emotionally, even immorally, or may act 'too white'...

    Therefore, characters may act irrationally, emotionally, even immorally, or may act 'too white' even though the reader may dislike them.
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    As a reader, someone might use judgment about a character's actions based on their values and...

    As a reader, someone might use judgment about a character's actions based on their values and beliefs about how actions "should" be performed. As authentic characters, they act based on the "current state" of their world, based on their personality, beliefs, values, and even their trauma.
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    Looking for feedback. Tell me what I could improve!

    Honestly... I have no comment. Your fiction is already quite competitive in SH's trending (mine doesn't even deserve a mention). If you want classy feedback, you need feedback from more established authors. In short, just keep writing.
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    That's right. It's hard to write stories that don't fit my tastes. It just so happens that my...

    That's right. It's hard to write stories that don't fit my tastes. It just so happens that my fiction niche is a niche within a niche. Lol
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    Am I the only one who isn't confident enough to think that there are readers who are willing to...

    Am I the only one who isn't confident enough to think that there are readers who are willing to pay to read fiction? Well, there are... I mean, I'm not confident enough to get my readers to pay just to read my fiction. Finding readers is hard... Getting readers to pay to read is even harder...
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    My day was quite pleasant. I hugged my little nephew. He's so cute. :blob_melt:

    My day was quite pleasant. I hugged my little nephew. He's so cute. :blob_melt:
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    Feedback for my novel "Hyoren Enjo Journey on Another World". And how should i proceed with chapter length.

    Your chapters are like giants, dude. My advice is simple: break them down into smaller chapters. For example, Chapter 1: Chapter Title Part 1, Chapter 2: Chapter Title Part 2, etc. Each chapter should be 1k-3k words. Then release your chapters regularly, a chapter per day. You need visibility...
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    Do you miss me, old friends?

    Who are you, dude? :blob_aww:
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    You should ask established authors like Corty and Envy. I'm just a hobbyist writer.

    You should ask established authors like Corty and Envy. I'm just a hobbyist writer.
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    I'm not an expert. I'm not a litRPG writer, but I'm a dark fantasy writer.

    I'm not an expert. I'm not a litRPG writer, but I'm a dark fantasy writer.
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    :blob_melt: Sorry, I'm late in replying. I'm busy writing today. How can I help you?

    :blob_melt: Sorry, I'm late in replying. I'm busy writing today. How can I help you?
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    Thanks for your attention. I'm fine.

    Thanks for your attention. I'm fine.
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    Well, I was so engrossed in reading and writing feedback for a new author that I lost track of...

    Well, I was so engrossed in reading and writing feedback for a new author that I lost track of time. It's time to get back to write my fiction. Marry and her little daughter are waiting for me... :blob_melt:
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