"Who is this beautiful witch girl whose gray hair sparkles in the wind? Well, it's me." - Elaina (Majo no Tabi Tabi)
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I have decided to stop interacting with fellow writers in this forum asking for help. My feedbacks and guides are all about increasing readers engagements and enjoyment when what most struggling writers need is emotional validation. I will leave that to you. You are the expert here.
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Learning the art of entertaining...
Welcome back, white Eldoria.
Sounds like your kind of story.
Tsugihagi Darake no Saikyou Yuusha
Arikawa Ougi, 16 years old, suddenly found himself reincarnated as a zombie?! Embarking on a journey to subjugate the Demon Lord as a zombie hero, but the use of "power" requires a "price"...? A dark fantasy in another world....
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One thing about tags, readers don't remember your character's identity or mannerisms as much as you. If we stop reading and come back later, it will be harder to know who's speaking even if they have a unique voice without tags. I think said and asked should be encouraged for new writers especially. It will help them get a feel for more impactful dialogue.
Today... I learned: reader validation makes your fiction more likely to be popular. However, author validation makes your fiction more likely to be worth reading. If a writer is chasing popularity, then do more market research, promotions and reader testimonials. If a writer is looking for narrative (artistic) quality, then learn from other (established) authors!
The sky was crying... not like my heart.
When the law is dead, I become the law. Blood for blood. Forgiveness belongs only to the victims! — Blood Rose Princess
Good shock value should make the reader feel like, "D*mt it! He did that crazy thing?! I totally missed the hint in the first chapter."
Not like, "Why did he suddenly do this crazy thing?! There was no hint, he was always portrayed as kind."
Sighed. I took off my cone-shaped hat, shook out my white hair. A burn sensation spread across my cheeks. The scent of sweat hit my nose.
I stood in the middle of the grassland, looked up. The white light dazzled my vision.
Hmm... maybe Mr Sun was angry.
From Sweetest breath from thee, my princess queen, Eldoria
Like honey seas, and sugar treats of small and mass euphoria
With violet eyes and vibrant hair as beautiful Alliaria
A kiss I ask from thee, or three, or i might not believe, you see
For I am the very model of demoness hysteria.
Do not fret, the Odyssey, one of the greatest literary works of Western culture, also looks back at what had happened.
An example of a review from an editor posing as a casual reader.
I thank an admin for finally removing one of the 'weird fiction' recommendations on my fiction page. Now... I can look at my fiction homepage without feeling weird about seeing it in a similar series.
What do you think about the combination of these 3 genres in 1 work: dark fantasy + psychological + tragedy?
You’ve been pouting a lot lately. Must be tough being a magical girl.
Have you ever heard of Magical Girl Minky Momo?
I didn't realize that was possible.
Is disembowel something like vowel? Or is it meant to be pronounced ‘dish em bowl’?
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