Recent content by Eldoria

Follow the adventure premise of your story! Check out Majo no Tabi-Tabi and Frieren for references. Elaina travels from one city to another, following her mother's journey. Meanwhile, Frieren travels back to reminisce about adventures with her friends (most of whom are now deceased).

There's another possibility: aromantic. This type typically struggles to feel romantically attached to others, has difficulty falling in love, and is more satisfied with planotic relationships (interpersonal relationships based on trust and genuine support). Regardless, I recommend writing what...

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A Lullaby of My Mommy in the Land of Colors

What about Akagami no Shank? Akami = red hair.

A white-haired woman gives a white ribbon to her little sister on her 7th birthday. She hugs her big sister cheerfully.

Which family drama is more interesting? (1) Title: A White Ribbon on My Birthday: I Love You So Much, My Big Sister Premise: A white-haired woman gives a white ribbon to her little sister on her 7th birthday. She hugs her big sister cheerfully. Her big sister is the gentlest woman in the...

Narrating an epic war scene on a battlefield involving hundreds of thousands of troops attacking each other. The situation is utterly chaotic. The atmosphere is utterly dark and brutal. Narrating this scene without distracting, confused, or losing the reader's focus is a complex challenge.

First, put your thread in the right place (the story feedback section). I'll call our new moderator to move this thread. Sorry for the trouble, dude @Tempokai :blob_melt:

One word. Unexpected. I just published a random story here to test it out; but readers loved it. On the other hand, the quality of my narrative makes me want to roll in the grass when I reread it. :blob_pout:

Not to be rude... but this claim is a bit of an exaggeration, isn't it?

Children are afraid to go to the bathroom alone in the dark at night. Not because they're afraid of ghosts... but because they're afraid of the darkness itself. Darkness often blurs the line between imagination and reality, leading to negative thoughts. Yesterday, I teased my little nephew. I...

The first chapter (read: prologue) usually contains the overall premise of the fiction. This chapter is usually designed with a fast pace and an instant payoff at the end (hook) to make the reader care about your story, especially your protagonist. How long should it be? Well, there's no rule...