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Thanks, dude. My goal was to validate the premise. If it's worth reading, I might follow it up to be a series. :blob_salute:

Please try mine again, dude. I'm trying to fix my hiatus fiction after rewriting it. I'm wondering if this prologue has a hook to keep readers interested. You don't need to dissect the manuscript technically, just give your opinion... are you interested in reading this fiction after reading the...

Please try my fiction again, sis. I'm trying to fix my hiatus fiction after rewriting it. I'm wondering if this prologue has a hook to keep readers interested. Thanks.

The basic level of reader is the 'listener'. They understand fiction through the explanations of the narrator. For example, children learn stories through bedtime stories. The advanced level is the 'interpreter'. They actively interpret the narrative, constructing an imaginative world, feeling...

I've provided detailed feedback here: https://www.scribblehubforum.com/threads/feed-back-on-my-first-story-is-appreciated.27819/

I leave you with this question before going offline: What's left for justice after the law dies?

There's nothing I can do for you. Reading and rating are entirely up to the reader's preference. I also won't force myself to read fiction that doesn't suit my tastes. Receiving a first rating often takes a lot of patience. My old fiction on RR took 7 months to receive its first rating. My...

I've read OP's chapters and provided some feedback. I'm pretty sure this feedback is accurate and constructive. If OP could follow this advice, your writing would be more powerful.

Just a quick comment, your chapter order is messed up. You should sort your chapters first. Edit: Wanting this feedback, I'd like a full book review on my new ongoing novel is contradictory. How can someone write a full review when the book is still incomplete (ongoing)? This is too much for...

Dialogue tags are less aesthetically pleasing, but they're necessary for reader navigation.

I agree with your answer. Body language is a subtle expression of emotion. Showing emotions through body language is a great way to make readers feel the character's emotional dynamics and avoid characters being too flat. However, this approach is not without criticism or, more precisely, not...

The fact that the editing stage exists inherently proves that the work wasn't originally written perfectly. It requires numerous edits, whether it's storytelling, story content, and language. If an author can write perfectly from the first draft, without typos, plot holes, info dumps, etc; they...

If I were in your shoes, I would STOP MY WRITING STYLE, rewrite my chapters, and continue the latest chapter with a new writing style. I would not betray the integrity of the work, the readers, and the growth of the writer's skills. No work is perfect from the start.

I've been foreshadowing the ending since the synopsis and prologue. So, well, every beginning has an ending.

If the writing quality is indeed good, then the content issues are likely irrelevant to engagement. It means that low engagement is more due to market preferences, fiction packaging, and promotion. The author is correct in identifying the synopsis and cover art as potentially problematic, as...