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Oh... I'm not a linguist. I'll skip this.

Loli...:blob_melt: Genben..:blob_dizzy: Marry?! :blob_shock: @FBI-Sama Please come here!:s_eek::blob_thor:

Well, after reading 3 chapters, my general impression is... your narrative tends to be heavy on telling. I don't know if this is your writing style or not. I checked your other series... and well, it hasn't changed much. If telling is your writing style, then you can ignore this feedback. But...

Fiction Packaging: The cover is okay, it looks cool. There are still too few tags, you can maximize the 25 tags to increase accessibility. Of course, use tags that are appropriate to the trope you are using. And the synopsis? Hmm... I'm actually a little disappointed. Your synopsis could be...

I've read three chapters, dude. I'm not interested in a review swap. But if you don't mind, I can give little honest feedback based on my reading experience in this thread.

I'm happy to see new members emerging and actively writing threads and providing answers. Also, some legendary members are back active. In comparison, I'm still a teenager in terms of account age on SHF. :blob_melt:

Sis... how many memes do you have saved to react to? Lol

Well, I'll highlight one strength and one weakness of the narrative. Strengths: The atmosphere feels alive in chapter 1; the city feels claustrophobic, dense, and suddenly tense. This is great for drawing the reader's imagination into the story world. Weaknesses: Static character descriptions...

My little suggestion: You can narrate the dialogue more naturally by minimizing dialogue tags (explanations related to the context of the dialogue) and filter words such as I said, asked mom, etc. You can utilize the character's unique voice, body language, and visual anchors as dialogue...

Dude... I would understand that (the atmosphere in the previous chapter) if your fiction was written on white paper. But your fiction is written on a digital screen where readers can enter any chapter. The paradigm of web novels and traditional novels is different. In web novels, ideally each...

I've only read snippets of chapters in this thread... why do you always open chapters with characters? This is very susceptible to white space syndrome. If you want to draw readers into your story, make a habit of starting scenes with atmosphere. Describe your environment, give texture to your...

Writing management? :blob_shock: :blob_dizzy: This is a very broad question, like asking about economic management. It might take a semester to answer comprehensively. (Shakes head) Or it could take more three years to earn a bachelor's degree in creative writing. Lol

One indicator of successful characterization is when readers can recognize who the speaking character is based on their unique voice. It might seem easy if there are only 1-3 characters. But what if there are 7 characters speaking in a single chapter? It's very possible for readers to get...

Honestly, it's unrealistic to edit >1m words in 1 month, dude. For comparison, I spent 1 month just to edit 20 chapters (~50k words). Editing is a tiring job, even harder than writing a new chapter. Writers need to dissect their manuscripts, analyze narrative structures, find narrative errors...

Congratulations! Today, I'm also happy to have received a 5-star rating for my hiatus fiction (Detective Clara). Readers should know... even seemingly 'trivial things' like likes, comments, ratings, or reads can mean a lot to authors. Because authors see their work appreciated by others...

I just realized you're a woman. :blob_melt: At least I didn't make the same mistake, mistaking you for a man in public like I did with her. @Rolanov :blob_aww: Wait a minute... I did it here.:blob_shock:

I asked a question: Lying about writing = not writing; Lying about not writing = writing; Lying about writing or not = ??? Gemini answered: Based on the logic of your paradox, the answer is Silence. Line 1: Claims a state of action while being stagnant. Line 2: Claims a state of stagnation...

I'd say a story with a simple, albeit clichéd, idea can be an amazing story if executed well. Conversely, I'd say a story with a bombastic, subversive idea can be boring if executed poorly. In the case of isekai, I suspect that many (trial and error) authors take shortcuts to ride the 'isekai...