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  1. Eldoria

    AI as a writer, I as a creator

    I don't understand how the conclusion about stiff writing can jump to writing assisted by other writer to writing assisted by AI comes from? But I will say... don't take other people's advice too seriously to the point of underestimating yourself. If you're writing just for fun, just write what...
  2. Eldoria

    Need helpful Criticism ❤️

    Sorry, dude. I'll pass on this fiction. Besides, she already got the detailed constructive feedback from him @MFontana
  3. Eldoria

    The chapters don't have numbering, dude.

    The chapters don't have numbering, dude.
  4. Eldoria

    Mildly Unreliable Story Feedback [CLOSED]

    Thank you for your review. I appreciate it. As for the sweet mother-daughter scene... well, that's actually been in the previous chapters. The chapter above does focus on the main lore. So, the mother-daughter interaction is reduced (not the main focus of the chapter). Also, regarding...
  5. Eldoria

    Feed back on my first story is appreciated

    Well, I've read three of your chapters in one sitting as a casual reader. My opinion here represents my reading experience. So you can consider it or not. Overall, I think you have an ambitious idea by trying to take on five protagonists simultaneously in isekai. When reading the first three...
  6. Eldoria

    Feed back on my first story is appreciated

    Wow... I'm honored to have my name used. :blob_melt:
  7. Eldoria

    We are reborn to bewitch you (reader) into a fantasy world. I'm Eldoria the white magical girl...

    We are reborn to bewitch you (reader) into a fantasy world. I'm Eldoria the white magical girl. She's a pink magical girl, @Kurayami :blob_melt:
  8. Eldoria

    Mildly Unreliable Story Feedback [CLOSED]

    Please try mine, dude. I'd love to hear a causal reader's opinion. This is a nobledark fiction with a motherhood core (the relationship between a mother and her little daughter) set in a post-apocalyptic world of amnesia. The chapter above is the core lore of this fiction. However, if you...
  9. Eldoria

    How many chapters before you read?

    My record for the most chapters I've read in SH is 90 chapters marathon. I read @Zinless his fiction before I became an author for my series. Now, I rarely read other fiction. When I do read other fiction, it's mostly for a feedback request, with a maximum of 5 chapters. But I just read an...
  10. Eldoria

    Need a feedback as new writer

    I'm not going to criticize you for using AI or writing with a pencil or anything. But consider the reading experience. Saying 'this is my writing style' is the easiest way to shut yourself off from improvement and alienate a segment of potential readers (well, if you don't want criticism, this...
  11. Eldoria

    Writing Finally, and Committing To The Bit (Rant).

    Dude... sorry, you seem a bit paranoid about starting something. If you demand perfection from the start, you shouldn't learn. Humans learn from mistakes. Don't be afraid to start. Don't worry about your work looking amateurish. Every writer starts with a scratch of black ink. Just write the...
  12. Eldoria

    You know... humans want what they don't have. I might be a little selfish. But I already have 3...

    You know... humans want what they don't have. I might be a little selfish. But I already have 3 little nephews...:blob_melt:
  13. Eldoria

    But I want a little niece or have a little daughter (if possible). :blob_teary: *please...

    But I want a little niece or have a little daughter (if possible). :blob_teary: *please wait..* I'm a (magical) little girl:blob_melt::s_eek:
  14. Eldoria

    :coffee: :blob_melt:

    :coffee: :blob_melt:
  15. Eldoria

    I finally hit 100 readers.

    Congratulations! You just need 400 readers to reach rising star status. :blob_melt:
  16. Eldoria

    I hit 100K Views in 29 days. [Congratulate or Shame me, both are fine]

    That's crazy (in the sense of amazing) Congratulations. :blob_melt:
  17. Eldoria

    3 Series/Fictional Pieces of Media That Inspired Your story?

    I'll skip this thread. My fiction isn't inspired by any particular series... and I'm not trying to be mainstream. It's just honest work about me (author), my story... and maybe even readers (if there are any).
  18. Eldoria

    I miss... you *I'm singing*

    I miss... you *I'm singing*
  19. Eldoria

    It's sunday :blob_melt:

    It's sunday :blob_melt:
  20. Eldoria

    I'm here.

    I'm here.
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