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Who are you? Bring back Daeron! :blob_teary:

If you were asking me about engagement in SH, I'd suggest you change your synopsis from a summary of the story to a relatable emotional experience character for the readers. Please use the following formula:

I don't want to turn a fictional narrative into a complicated mathematical statistics table. Lol

Well, not bad, dude. But my fiction here isn't one of those popular fictions that regularly trend.

Oh... you're back. Your patient's been waiting for a long time, dude.

I just sympathize with your fiction, dude. The RR algorithm relies more on recommendations and ads than visibility. My fiction is also struggling on RR without any help, no ads, no review exchanges, just regular chapter releases. Besides, my fiction is quite niche. So, I don't have any good...

Well, good luck. I'll be looking forward to seeing how you transform your narrative into something more in-depth from Lila's perspective. Regards. :blob_melt:

Well, now I'll explain what I felt as a reader when reading chapter 1. Honestly, the atmosphere of your chapter 1 was good. The description of the environment was detailed. I liked it because I felt like I easily entered your story world, the visualization of the environment was very easy to...

Well, I agree with you. The limited third POV is right in line with your narrative goal, where you want the reader to connect with the protagonist. But there's a problem, dude/sis... as a reader, I don't feel connected to your protagonist. I feel like a passive spectator... and furthermore, I...

I got a long comment. Lol

Well, I've read chapter 1 (prologue?). I wanted to ask, what kind of POV did you use in chapter 1? And why did you choose that POV?

Rewatch Your Lie in April

I'm happy for you, dude. But I hope it's not a compliment like this: I'd much rather get a short, honest comment like this:

There are differences between in-person (real-world) social interactions and online interactions, which can lead to criticism being interpreted differently. Furthermore, the author's age also determines how criticism will be responded to. Teenagers, for example, are in a phase of identity...

As I suspected, you're still too young for honest, constructive, and blunt feedback. Initially, I wanted to offer such feedback. But I backed off after seeing your age profile, which was too young. I know that kind of feedback can backfire. Young authors need more growth. Too harsh criticism...

@lizzyrose Listen to his/her @GhoulishTales advice. If you consistently apply at least 70% of his/her advice to your writing, your writing will approach the pro-level of a self-publishing.