I could use an honest opinion, for sure, and I'll prepare myself for the possible brutality. It'll make me nervous, but that's normal for me. 
Here you go read mine. I hope you enjoy it.I ran a similar thread before, but I eventually likened all my feedback to reading a story for the sake of answering questions for a book essay for english class. Which as you imagine, is not very fun. So, I've now decided to make giving feedback even more fun for me by being completely unapolgetic and unleashing the full scope of my ADHD and Autism at your expense.
What I will do:
What YOU will do:
- Read your story until I'm not reading your story.
- Tell you what I think.
- Deliver brief, constructive criticism by pointing out any blaringly obvious errors or other silly shenanigans in your prose.
- Provide me your story that isn't straight up porn or translated by robots.
- Be aware that I have preferences for all forms of Fantasy, Horror/Thriller/Grimdark, Sci-fi, Comedy
- Take my words with a grain of spicy salt.
- Not try to pour said spicy salt back into my own mouth because silly, insane, internet lady hurt your fee-fees.
- Understand that your are receiving a casual review by someone who views your story through the lens of severe, inattentive ADHD.
- Understand that it is rare for me to read more than the first chapter without forcing myself. If I read more than one chapter, congratulations, you managed to hook in one of the most inattentive people on the planet. You get a gold star.
And ff you've posted your story before in the past, feel free to recommend it again.
Especially if you've rewritten parts or anything of the like, as it's very unlikely I'll remember anyone's story. (except pangmida's)
Here you go:I ran a similar thread before, but I eventually likened all my feedback to reading a story for the sake of answering questions for a book essay for english class. Which as you imagine, is not very fun. So, I've now decided to make giving feedback even more fun for me by being completely unapolgetic and unleashing the full scope of my ADHD and Autism at your expense.
What I will do:
What YOU will do:
- Read your story until I'm not reading your story.
- Tell you what I think.
- Deliver brief, constructive criticism by pointing out any blaringly obvious errors or other silly shenanigans in your prose.
- Provide me your story that isn't straight up porn or translated by robots.
- Be aware that I have preferences for all forms of Fantasy, Horror/Thriller/Grimdark, Sci-fi, Comedy
- Take my words with a grain of spicy salt.
- Not try to pour said spicy salt back into my own mouth because silly, insane, internet lady hurt your fee-fees.
- Understand that your are receiving a casual review by someone who views your story through the lens of severe, inattentive ADHD.
- Understand that it is rare for me to read more than the first chapter without forcing myself. If I read more than one chapter, congratulations, you managed to hook in one of the most inattentive people on the planet. You get a gold star.
And ff you've posted your story before in the past, feel free to recommend it again.
Especially if you've rewritten parts or anything of the like, as it's very unlikely I'll remember anyone's story. (except pangmida's)
