ADHD feedback for your chapters

[BattleCryLioness]

I'm AuDHD, myself, so I get it! I could use an honest opinion, for sure, and I'll prepare myself for the possible brutality. It'll make me nervous, but that's normal for me.

The Powers Bestowed: Origins

 

[LJCamo]

I also has severe inattentive ADHD, I managed to read through the first chapter of my story. Hopefully you can too.

Agent Atlas Adams

Atlas Adams is an agent of the Supernatural Enforcement Agency (S.E.A); a hidden branch of the American government that specialises in policing, containing, and killing supernatural and impossible threats to the world. Atlas has a gift, he can see how and when a person is going to die (...

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[Lysander_Works]

Here's hoping my beginnings keep that interest.

Mastering Metrics in Another World