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Shit, so the story I had planned won't fit on here then. Off to Literotica it is then.

I gained one more reader for my story. That brings my total to 13.

People who pour sauce all over the fries, instead of dipping the fries in the sauce. Is it laziness or a mental deficiency issue? It's just so messy.

The world is pitch black Everyone else has a match Only I must thread in the dark Only I must wrestle my fear Only I must befriend despair The moon's glow It is swallowed whole In this hell Where the sun never rises Where night is eternal Everyone has a match A sliver of hope A faint glow It...

Bit harsh, but fair. I do disagree with you though. Some authors aren't full-time authors. I myself have a job that pays me peanuts and I contemplate quitting everyday, but I need to at least feed myself if nothing else. I'm fairly fast, I write my chapters on weekends and edit Sunday nights...

Yes, yes, a million times yes.

I hear my struggles aren't that uncommon amongst writers. Especially the lack of life experiences part.

Plot. The reason is pretty simple, I start writing from basic ideas. Sometimes something as simple as a book title in my head can spur me to start writing. That means I have to wing it as I go. So, I have to be careful to not contradict myself without making it make sense to the reader. Writing...

Interesting. I would make him mysterious as possible. I would give him no name, change his face often and make his interactions as out there as possible. The context of the story matters, but if the story allows I would make him seem almost insane. I would make him nonchalant about the suffering...

No no, I don't enjoy it you know. It's more bipolar than sadism, it's just that in my manic phases bodies drop. ?

Only if they can survive being raped by a creature with a cat's genitalia.

It's why I created an immortal this time. I can take out my frustrations on him and he'll keep coming back. Sadly for him, those around him won't survive my tantrums.

It's very funny. I create a new character, I'm in love. I know them well, they speak to me regularly. Then as the story progresses, their actions become incomprehensible, leaving me to flounder about, trying to make it make sense to readers. When I get fed up, I just kill them. It's either me or...

I don't know what I'm doing here, send help! Oh, never mind, I'll just kill all of them.

Uhm... I got a pass mark from TheTrinary-nim, but I want to get as many opinions as possible. My story is about an immortal, that's basically it. Currently, I'm trying to stay away from making it a bland slice of life story, but it will become one. The big theme will be loss. The tags are...

If you comment after me, I will send the monster haunting Silas' dream after you.

I saw the title and knew hilarity would ensue in the comments. I wasn't disappointed. Well, I would advice you learn proper English grammar if you want to write in English. Various apps can help with spell-check and Grammarly helps a bit with punctuations (sometimes) and a but of grammar. But...

I just write what turns me on. Literotica is a treasure trove for people who want to learn. Most of the stuff there are very explicit, and you can find very well written work to pick apart. I myself have one or two stories there.

Everyone already pointed it out, and I'm not sure I can add anything new. I will just say, at the end of the day you simply need to write it well, whatever it is. I know it's fanfiction, but it would serve you better to approach the story as a new one, with characters readers are unfamiliar...

Honestly, I kind of write in a daze. Words pop up in my head and I go with it. Descriptions therefore aren't my forte, but I try to describe as little as possible to give readers room to imagine. That said, descriptions are all about being creative for me. I could go, "his voice was a deep...