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Do mine! I'm really curious to know what people think of my story. Still in the beginning part of the story and it is a slow burner, with no major conflicts at all yet, but please review it if you can. Thank you!

Hmmm. The story of where I come from is a long, boring one. I could regale you with the sleep inducing tales of my homeland, but would you not like to hear instead the exciting, heart palpitating story of where I am? After all, I ran from my homeland the first chance I got. As for where I am...

Even though Doritos was fatal to Space Mecha S, her love for Doritos was immeasurable. She—being from space—lacked any common sense, and instead of asking for the Doritos the poor dead girl was eating, she took the pack instead from the cold hands of the dead girl. What is this tasty looking...

My story is currently languishing in a wasteland of obscurity because my pride is just too god damn hard to break. I applaud your bravery, at some point it is no longer pride but cowardice that stops us from pushing our stories to the world, "what if they don't like it?" "If even after all that...

So she shot herself in the head with all 57 rounds, it is all futile anyways, we'll lose anyways, why should I let myself be killed by the enemies, she thought before committing the dastardly act.

Depends on the writer I suppose. Personally, I know the structure of drama stories better, so it is easier to write. Sometimes I have felt that a lot of comedies are actually dramas with funny characters, or serious characters thrust into funny situations; perhaps that is because on some level...

It's not bad to not finish a story, but if your goal is writing a complete story then you need to work on making it a habit to write even when you aren't motivated to. Every author loses enthusiasm for their work as they write at some point, but learning to continue to write even then is what...

ASMR, definitely ASMR. You try the massage ones, I'm partial to those. Experiment with it and find the one that works for you. They knock me out in 15 minutes or less.

I can't read my own stuff either, and honestly I can't judge if it's good or bad, I just start yawning and fall asleep as soon as I read past a certain point. Without question I'll rewrite the story, so I'm just leaving everything as is until I finish the story, after all, there is still a lot...

Hmm. It's going to be hard cause I'm still writing the story, and as a discovery writer I need to write to know, since I don't outline; I will tell you what I have so far. In broad terms there are two categories of magic, and both are mana dependent. Contract magic and attribute magic. The main...

Haha, tremble at my awesome power.

I just saw this, someone propping up my story? You are doing God's work and I think I'm in love with you. ?

Athletic, depressed outcast who tried committing suicide and is only alive because the rope couldn't hold his weight.

I feel this in my bone. Readers are basically reading my first draft, and I am a discovery writer, trying to keep the story consistent is so hard. I have to constantly check what I wrote previously to make sure it meshes well with what I'm writing. A simple example, I keep forgetting whether I...

It is funny but I wrote somewhere that my MC and his sister were identical twins (my MC is male) and until a reader pointed it out in the comments I had no idea. Not a plot hole, more of a stupid error that my readers pointed out to me.

I used to be suicidal (not sure I'm truly over that) and writing helped me vent, so yeah. I wouldn't say I love it, but it's something I did to stay grounded. I finish in minutes and breathe once I'm done. Sometimes I rap, it irks those around me to no end, but it helps me, so...

Huge fan, they are all I watch. It's funny, because when I was younger I always made fun of people who watched k-dramas, the melodrama was too much back then (it still is now, but there are a lot more chill ones now). Currently watching: My roommate is a gumiho, monthly magazine and imitation...

It is impossible to reread what I wrote and be struck by wonder the way my readers would. It is my story, I wrote it, that takes away any sort of entertainment I might've gotten had someone else wrote it. When I reread my story, only technical errors appear out of ordinary. Just today I reread...

I was going to say yes, regardless of what stupid thing you were considering doing. As for your dilemma, honestly, there is nothing wrong with it. You just have to make sure it doesn't mess up the continuity, and that you write it well.

Personally, I describe characters as little as possible. I mention key traits, but clothing isn't something I describe. The main reason is whenever I've read a book, descriptions like those bored me. Unless the clothes add something to the story, or is used to hint at a character's mood, I skip...