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Thank you. About the voice, I didn't want to make it too old. A character as old as mine would find even ancient English modern. I do not trust my ability to write that way convincingly. Besides I've been told the most enjoyable reads are ones written in a voice the reader finds easy to follow...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/260099/eternal/ So I know it says first chapter feedback, but I would appreciate it if someone read all 3 uploaded chapters and gave me feedback. It's just over 5k words. Please, thank you!

Ok, but did you read the story or just stop after reading the synopsis? I'll eventually get around to changing the synopsis, but what I want to know is how the story itself reads. Is it boring to you? Why is it so? What do you think could make it interesting?

Oh my God, thank you. About the synopsis, without a doubt, I would need to rewrite that. I intend for the whole story to be kind of a recollection of events since it's written from the first-person point of view, but I am not confident enough to pull it off. And I was thinking of introducing...

So I started a new series. It's my first ever story I'm putting out there. It's called Eterna. So far I have 2 chapters up, just over 3 thousand words written. Can some please read and review it for me? I'm not getting any feedback from anywhere, and I would really like to know if I'm doing...

I just posted my first chapter on here. It was pretty short and almost like an introduction to the story. Plan is to get people hooked, then start blasting links to my Patreon all over the place. Working on ideas for what the perks could be.