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A fair assessment. Although I'd rather not use POV terms for the side characters in a story. I know people can manage multiple POV characters but I haven't found a way to. For the last example that is a bit of Beta's and a bit of the Narrator's POV. Just a bit of detail to flesh out how they...

:s_wink::biggrin_s:That's fair. That's exactly where I got the idea for the title.

Aww no takers then

Much obliged. Will look into it.

If you can spare the time, any feedback, tips and tricks you are willing to offer for the following will be greatly appreciated. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1096576/son-of-the-sun/

If you can kindly spare the time, I'd appreciate a good round of honest feedback. PS1: If you want me to look into your work. I'd be happy to. PS2: Much obliged by the way. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1096576-son-of-the-sun/chapter/1206875/

I think taking most criticism/feedback in good faith is fine. The critic is spending their valuable time giving it to you after all. Of course, you should be able to judge how valid it is.

Greetings, if you can spare the time to review the following: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1096576/son-of-the-sun/ It would be very appreciated. It is a fantasy work. PS: Much obliged. Any thoughts or corrections or tips and tricks to improve will be very appreciated

That's fair. I'd need a bit more to work with though.

I thank you for your time all the same. I will look into it. The they is referring to the organization/group he(Beta) is part of. She with the lustrous skin(Epsilon) is referencing a disgraced/deposed royalty. Worm is a slur against his(Nu's) race/species. I actually have tried reading...

Nitpick is fine. I'll look into the points you raised.

My computer was out so I had to write the chapter on my phone and then make a hundred edits later. With such a rough development I request honest feedback on the last chapter of my story. PS: Much obliged for your time.

Being tropey doesn't necessarily mean bad though.

Us mere mortals need to be taught this speed reading technique. No way can we get through this in less than a week.

Ehh why not

Holy hell 14 chapters a week. That's some output.

No long introduction. Just short abstraction.

A bit too soon to expect a review. Give it a few chapters more

Obviously behind the scenes the planet has been doing weighted-clothes gravity training next to a super massive blackhole.

You guys are missing the forest for the trees here. No one is saying that power fantasies aren't appealing. What I am specifically saying is that imitating visual media which have a whole host of limitations(primarily being budgetary and time constraints) are being thoughtlessly imitated by the...