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  1. HellsPerfectSpawn

    Soo, any thoughts, critique or feedback for the following?

    Aww shucks, you'll make me blush. Thank you for taking the time to look over it and give me some feedback
  2. HellsPerfectSpawn

    Soo, any thoughts, critique or feedback for the following?

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1667370/creature-feature/ It's about 17k ish words. Anyone taking time out for this is a right gentleman. Much obliged.
  3. HellsPerfectSpawn

    For a second there I thought I was hallucinating

    Ahh damn. It's basic supply and demand though. Obviously there must be a lot of demand for it, otherwise it would have fallen flat on its face. But it really really makes it seem like some machine assembly product.
  4. HellsPerfectSpawn

    For a second there I thought I was hallucinating

    Oh, that does explain something, although not why they are all so popular to reach this category though.
  5. HellsPerfectSpawn

    I feel so popular right now

    Getting swamped by half a dozen 'Artists' who love my work. I'll wait a bit and open an anime studio or something.
  6. HellsPerfectSpawn

    How well does this cover work?

    Aww shucks, you're going to give me a big head. That precisely was my intention. Cheers. Although even if people didn't quite get that. Giant asscrack in the sky got quite a chuckle from me.
  7. HellsPerfectSpawn

    How well does this cover work?

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1667370/creature-feature/ It's called Creature Feature but it isn't intended to be for everyone.
  8. HellsPerfectSpawn

    How well does this cover work?

    The big anus hath spoken from half a million kms away.
  9. HellsPerfectSpawn

    How well does this cover work?

    You're not wrong??
  10. HellsPerfectSpawn

    How well does this cover work?

    Book cover. Specifically https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1667370/creature-feature/
  11. HellsPerfectSpawn

    Humor Writing the trench warfare of writing.

    I'll take that if that's what you took from the above.
  12. HellsPerfectSpawn

    Humor Writing the trench warfare of writing.

    Yeah, i think the age of intended audience matters more. Whimsy and surprise jokes with no setup tend to work on a younger audience .
  13. HellsPerfectSpawn

    Humor Writing the trench warfare of writing.

    That's an excellent observation. They get drowned in the word soup.
  14. HellsPerfectSpawn

    Humor Writing the trench warfare of writing.

    That is how I try to layer the jokes. These kind have a higher chance of falling flat on their faces than the marvel Stark Snark variety. But those get insufferable fast. Cheers, I'll check it out.
  15. HellsPerfectSpawn

    Humor Writing the trench warfare of writing.

    The protagonist is a dude who is old enough to be her father. She is used to dressing skimpily hence it doesn't matter much if there is a nip in the air. She managed to swindle a meal out of him.
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