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I’ll take some of that sweet sweet goodness. The candy should be in the signature. PS: Much obliged by the way. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1096576/son-of-the-sun/

I'll get to it. I don't binge read anything though. I like to take my time.

It's been chaotic to say the least. Anyone up for feedback/review swaps I'm game. On your end if you could kindly go over just the prologue + 4 chapters (less if you feel its not your cup of tea), that should be enough for a proper sniff test. PS: Much obliged...

Sure thing I'm game. On your end just the prologue + 4 chapters is going to be enough for a sniff test.

Cheers. I will look into those. I tend to write tags so that people don't complain there is a talking heads syndrome but I suppose too much of that is bad too. I'll try to vary them a bit though. Much Obliged

Greetings, hopefully this will be the final version. Any feedback/tips are very appreciated.

I wasn't happy with it, let me see if I can shear a bit more flab of it.

Cheers buddy. I'll look into the gremlins. PS: I'm very grateful for the feedback.

Greetings, another moderate retooling. Any feedback/tips are very appreciated.

Much obliged for the feedback. I seriously don't understand how some authors can pump out 10-15k words a week. PS: Thank you again. I asked you specifically because I was impressed how fair and in-depth your criticism was.

Heyo, another moderate retooling. Any feedback/tips are very appreciated.

Very grateful for the feedback. Will look into the pain points. I've been slowly retooling the chapters so this is great actionable intel.

Another moderate retooling. Any feedback/tips are very appreciated.

Well no luck with this one maybe second time is the charm. The following chapter also underwent a minor retooling. How successful is it? Does it ruin the flow? Any feedback will be very appreciate. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1096576-son-of-the-sun/chapter/1096582/

I just wanted to put it as a .doc file but it wasn't letting me for some reason In .txt format for those leery of .zip file.

I'm back again. If you can kindly spare the time, I'd appreciate a good round of honest feedback on a rewrite/ slight retooling of a chapter. PS1: If you want me to look into your work. I'd be happy to. PS2: Much obliged by the way.

But should you be slavishly listening to other people though? Feedback should only be taken as a general guideline. If you are happy with what you've done, no point not posting it

Much obliged. Doubly appreciated since you did it anyways.

That I'd get behind. Sounds like a fun romp.

Fair enough. Much obliged by the way.