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    I'm praying I encounter this Convo line during my playthrough

    If that's really in game dialogue... that's freaking BRILLIANT.
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    Need Help Starting This Story

    Or even to transmigrate?
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    Thoughts about Author inserts

    But if it's Maura Lee Karupt you've wandered onto Danny the Street...
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    Things you've learned Through writing

    No that sounds EXACTLY like a writer. Exactly. That too.
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    Eternity will | would you like to give us your reviews on my first novel

    Heh - I had a novel (well, novella) that kept getting so dark I had to step away from it for a few days. Sadly, the computer it was on crashed before I got back to it the last time I stepped away and I haven't worked up the nerve to try and rewrite it yet.
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    What and why the bloody hell is there so many god damn thing about the human body that can be trained?!?!?!

    That's from a weird mashup of Buddhist and Daoist magic, the Diamond Sutra IIRC. Make the skin hard like a diamond. The few I've seen start with a street brawler who needs to learn discipline and begin with breathing. Don't recall the titles; all that stuck with me was that one common trait...
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    Things you've learned Through writing

    Most surprising? Not sure. If I ever share my attempt at a "steamy romance" story (essentially NC-17, not X but maybe a LITTLE past R rated) t then either "that I had the nerve to try to write and then share it, despite it sucking" or "that I could actually write that kind of stuff." But...
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    What and why the bloody hell is there so many god damn thing about the human body that can be trained?!?!?!

    I always thought the lungs were the first thing trained, via breathing exercises; it was the first thing Chiun taught Remo, and was also a focus in two other martial arts stories I read back in the 90s at lest. Then, once breathing is right, train the stomach and related systems, following or...
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    Magic World without Cultivation

    Go back to the classics, where magic was unreliable, dangerous, something to be fought AGAINST and not WITH. R. E. Howard, H. P. Lovecraft, C. S. Lewis, or even J. R. R. Tolkien. Or where magic is used by the "support characters" and not the (usually children) heroes - like the works of Edith...
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    Fanfic request

    DC's Emotional Spectrum is: Red = Rage/Anger Orange = Greed Yellow = Fear Green = Willpower Blue = Hope/Healing Indigo = ... blanking on this one Violet = Love/Lust White = Healing Black = Death/Undeath My Champions character had White = Base form, flying brick Red/Orange = either speed or...
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    Outline for a first chapter. Does it seem interesting, does it need change, as well as any of your other thoughts.

    Looks more like a storyboard (more specifically the storyboards I've seen for comic books) than a traditional outline. Is "X" the character's name (like L and M in DeathNote), or is it just "This character is unimportant so I'm using a placeholder instead of a name"?
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    Why is there no Anime Art?

    There is a lot of anime style art if you dig down a few pages. The irony of anime art is that it originated from an attempt to copy the art of Walt Disney's films, but evolved into something distinct.
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    Fanfic request

    Not sure how to write this in a story. Had a character I created for a Champions game that never started called Spectrum who could split into seven duplicates (original was white, each copy was one of the seven colors of the rainbow, with slightly weaker physical stats but each had a unique...
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    I just made the best cover of my life, and I need opinions?

    I would suggest either sticking with just black, white, and red (the Sin City look, I guess), or adding the glowing blue somewhere else. And I think the reason the head does not QUITE mesh with the body is due to the lack of cross-hatching (not sure if it's supposed to be hair or just uneven...
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    Writing What are your thoughts on redemption arcs? Do they always need to happen, or should some characters stay villains?

    Some characters should be irredeemable. Some should be like Darth Vader - redeemed at the last possible second by an act of sacrifice. You should NOT follow the lead of Once Upon A Time and have 75% of the villains not only redeemable but redeemable within the season where they first appear (at...
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    Novel visibility.

    Pictures need to either be posted to the artists forum here (a cheat that does not always work) or posted to an image hosting site and linked, either in the text, or more often, in an Author's Note. (there are probably more detailed instructions in the FAQ)
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    [Vent] For Authors who just need a moment to let it all out

    So she writes vampire porn that sells millions of copies and claims it's Fantasy? If so, glad I don't know who she is (and a little less unhappy that all the bookstores in the area are gone).
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    Magic systems?

    Organically - it evolves from a kernel. With Strange Awakening and the Jack Diamond stories, magic comes in three forms (possibly four though...) - Mundane Magic - the magic that allows the basic laws of physics and biology to operate. Faerie Magic - which is illusion and nature magic...
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    [Vent] For Authors who just need a moment to let it all out

    I have no idea who Sarah J. Maas is so there is THAT...
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    Have getting Isekaied into Novel/Game gone out of fire

    More likely it was a bandwagon thing that everyone jumped on after a few really took off, and now it's down to a "normal" level (I have two - one I haven't released anywhere, and one that is the most popular story I have on this site, myself, and know of at least two others that are being worked...
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