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    New novel available!

    So it's a new novel, but is it a novel novel, or a plain old run of the mill novel?
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    Recommendations Brainless female characters

    Why female characters? In @ThatAdamGuy's Henry Rider novels, SHE sees herself that way (both not smart AND too lazy to think) yet really is not. Not sure if that would count?
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    Feedback on my Story idea?

    One story I have not posted anywhere has an MC who knows he isn't really the MC, but even that is something he's willing to lie about (he takes the idea of an "unreliable narrator" to new heights, keeping secrets even from the writer...) - the real MC, at least in a cosmic sense, is his love...
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    Want to show off your Badge of Honour?

    I'm afraid to test mine. Strange Awakening might slip through with a low percentage but the others? Even though the only AI I use (other than half my covers) is basic spell and grammar checking, my personal style is closer to AI than I like to believe...
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    I need help with commerce of my story's world

    Why is the commerce system important to the story? Nine times out of ten, it can just be handwaved (especially in LitRPG/GameLit). Just have a general idea in place and don't worry about the details unless it is a major plot point for some reason (exception - it can be vital in historical...
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    I had trouble with rough drafts?

    I'm kind of in the reverse of this - I wound up getting "stuck" into a serialized format from having tried to write full novels. This has led to me having to stall some more popular stuff to work on some new stuff (one if which is now being released almost live).
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    What’s your take on kill systems in web novels? (i.e., any mechanism where the MC gains power directly from killing, like leveling up, etc.)

    The Dark Powers of Ravenloft system... each act of Evil (including murder, betrayal, etc.) gains you more power but increases the odds of you being trapped in your own special prison realm... Never knew there was a Quentin; the guys who made the TCG must have seen the anime movie and thought it...
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    INCOMPLETE/ON BREAK

    Yeah I'd have two on Hiatus at the moment just because I have not had time to focus on them. Plan to continue but too tied up with other stuff to get back yet...
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    IS IT ADVISABLE TO RELEASE ONCE A WEEK OR EVERYDAY?

    I started to do twice a week on all stories but then caught up to my backlog last November and have only been posting one to three chapters a week (total, between four active stories) since then. Had my biggest increase of readers right about when I had to cut back and have not recovered either...
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    Am I COOKING Something here?

    Well, from a "sufficiently advanced" society it may not need that. In the TV series TimeTraxx, there were two SELMA units - one was in a clothing article (I keep thinking a wristwatch, but haven't seen the show since ... the mid to late 90s) held by a fugitive, and the other by the main...
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    What’s your take on kill systems in web novels? (i.e., any mechanism where the MC gains power directly from killing, like leveling up, etc.)

    In fact, for the first minute or so after a Quickening, they seemed weaker... Apparently the first movie was a mix of two ideas: The Elevator Pitch was "A vampire movie but the vampires only feed on each other and do so by decapitation." The other idea was the alleged Legend of the Clan...
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    Is there a way to write a mind control story that's not a harem?

    It was a reference to the human tendency to ... selfishness and self-gratification. At least that was how I read it - so "in general, humans will use mind control to become rich, famous, and harem-endowed" (but there may be exceptions that are more ... humane than human, I guess)
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    Is there a way to write a mind control story that's not a harem?

    "Now listen to me, dear reader: What you just read was not a harem story, and no mind control was used at all. Oh, and dump your shares of Apple."
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    Is there a way to write a mind control story that's not a harem?

    Individually, humans can be pretty amazing. Taken as a whole group, though, we are pretty much trash...
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    Is there a way to tell what is indie writer work here and what is translation?

    Been listening to the PocketFM translation of "My Vampire System" and it is fairly common for a character to be referred to by the wrong pronoun (USUALLY female characters called by male pronouns but, in the first 600 chapters, there are at least three instances of the reverse as well). Also...
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    What’s your take on kill systems in web novels? (i.e., any mechanism where the MC gains power directly from killing, like leveling up, etc.)

    Kill systems are a throwback to the early days of RPGs, where the only way to gain experience was to kill and loot. If in a fantasy setting where life is cheap, or the character is a monster (My Vampire System, My Werewolf System, etc.) it makes sense, but otherwise it's just a bit too brutal...
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    Is this thing still going on?
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    Am i imagining things

    Lewis Carrol came close with some of his full titles: The Hunting of the Snark: An Agony in Eight Fits Alice's Adventures Through the Looking Glass and What She Found There. And Mary Shelley's best known work would fit in with some of the more pretentious modern titles: Frankenstein - or The...
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    Is there a way to write a mind control story that's not a harem?

    Oh, forgot the granddaddy (or maybe just great uncle) of all psi-power stories; know there was mind control in it but don't recall it getting closer to a harem than a "love triangle" with the villain one corner of the equation - the Skylark series by E. E. "Doc" Smith.
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