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  1. Eldoria

    My writing was criticized for grammar errors. Lol :blob_melt:

    My writing was criticized for grammar errors. Lol :blob_melt:
  2. Eldoria

    You are a respectable writer who cares about the quality of your narrative, continuing to edit...

    You are a respectable writer who cares about the quality of your narrative, continuing to edit and improve the narrative even after the story is finished. :blob_melt:
  3. Eldoria

    For anyone who’s got some free time—

    Your engagement is on the right track. Look! Out of an average of 3 views, there are at least 2 favorites. It means that out of 3 clicks, 2 members like your story. Your story is entertaining for readers. If you're wondering why there haven't been any or very few comments, it's purely because...
  4. Eldoria

    You are lucky because you know an immortal magical girl like me. :blob_melt:

    You are lucky because you know an immortal magical girl like me. :blob_melt:
  5. Eldoria

    Sorry, only my mommy who may kiss my cheek. :blob_melt:

    Sorry, only my mommy who may kiss my cheek. :blob_melt:
  6. Eldoria

    Missed Day

    At least you haven't encountered a troll yet. I've encountered 1 star troll twice in RR. :blob_melt:
  7. Eldoria

    Intimacy without Romance

    Build a platonic relationship: one based on support, trust, and affection without possessiveness. My second FMC also has a platonic relationship with my first FMC's younger brother who is willing to do anything to keep my second FMC alive, even if it means being hated by my second FMC.
  8. Eldoria

    Am love to hear your thoughts

    The synopsis is more like a plot summary, without any emotional appeal to potential readers. Please transform your synopsis into the emotional experience promised in your story. You can use the following synopsis formula (typically used in commercial novels): So, your synopsis will serve as a...
  9. Eldoria

    Have you ever put one of your stories on hiatus?

    I have four of my five fiction works on hiatus. I was so enthusiastic at the beginning that I didn't realize my limitations. I also didn't focus much on engagement. Now I'm more focused on improving the quality of my narrative (repeated editing). One work already consumes a lot of resources...
  10. Eldoria

    Dark joke

    Dark joke
  11. Eldoria

    Missing original series - mine (404 error)

    It's possible your fiction was accidentally affected by the translation cleanup. Please contact the admin via email at contact us.
  12. Eldoria

    It was an unpleasant experience. I can understand it. When I first started using this forum...

    It was an unpleasant experience. I can understand it. When I first started using this forum... I was even accused of being a bot, not a human, just because my comments were too clinical and neat. Well, that issue is long over... so let it be in the past. :blob_melt:
  13. Eldoria

    This isn't the first time I've posted something like it. It just so happened that yesterday, I...

    This isn't the first time I've posted something like it. It just so happened that yesterday, I was checking old feedback... but several writers didn't responded, even if it was just a "like." I'm sorry if you were affected. You're better than those who remain silent as if nothing happened.
  14. Eldoria

    Just to clarify... I'm not mad at you. You're one of three writers I gave feedback to yesterday...

    Just to clarify... I'm not mad at you. You're one of three writers I gave feedback to yesterday on the same day. The post is generally a message to remind us of the importance of mutual respect as fellow writers, readers, and human beings. :blob_melt:
  15. Eldoria

    Writing The Non-Verbal Thesaurus

    That's only possible if the reader recognizes the characters after reading a few chapters (especially the character introductions). But for readers who happen to be passing through that chapter, even a unique voice, no matter how authentic, is difficult to distinguish when multiple characters...
  16. Eldoria

    Writing The Non-Verbal Thesaurus

    The use of the "said" tag in dialogue adopts a telling approach, emphasizing clarity. Meanwhile, the "action" tag uses a showing approach, emphasizing experience. You might criticize the action tag for being too convoluted, but discourse truly transcends text. Body language is nearly...
  17. Eldoria

    He's male, dude. :blob_melt:

    He's male, dude. :blob_melt:
  18. Eldoria

    Because a violation occurs from the very beginning when critical readers read fiction. The...

    Because a violation occurs from the very beginning when critical readers read fiction. The magical effects of fiction only work if the reader consents to being bewitched. That's why casual readers are more likely to enjoy a story than experienced readers or authors. Because they seek...
  19. Eldoria

    Can u give me some feedback for my 1st chapter? :)

    That's a French style of dialogue. I suspect the OP is French or influenced by French culture. :blob_melt:
  20. Eldoria

    AI can mimic emotional responses. But it will never have feelings. AI is just a thing, not human...

    AI can mimic emotional responses. But it will never have feelings. AI is just a thing, not human being.
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