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  1. SakeVision

    What are your least favorite type of main characters?

    the self insert generic bland types
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    who were you running from

    who were you running from
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    Anybody Play HOI4?

    yeah, but only for the fallout mod
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    I don't like this kind of animation.

    I don't like this kind of animation.
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    How's my first chapter?

    If I were to give some advice, it's not to rewrite, but keep going and write what is essentially your first draft. Then 10-20 chapters in, rewrite them to make more "sense" as a whole.
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    How's my first chapter?

    Nice cover, but unfortunately, not at all. Some instances of weird English aside, there is too much happening with too little exposition. In other words, I have no idea what is going on, and it all seems like nonsense.
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    so many novels have 100% great premise and then they devolve into generic bullshit

    so many novels have 100% great premise and then they devolve into generic bullshit
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    stop judging novels based on premises, it encourages the authors to focus on that rather than...

    stop judging novels based on premises, it encourages the authors to focus on that rather than what should come after that
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    Writing i need some help with world building IMPLICATIONS (urban fantasy)

    lol sounds like a way to create a matriarchy dommy mommy girlboss with milky uwu
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    ah good memories

    ah good memories
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    Characters/Events/Items in your stories that reference Mythology/History

    My main novel's fantasy world is based on the chinese Song dynasty period, but this was totally intentional.
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    Teach me some good curse words for a Goddess (18+)

    "Leap on dick, cunt!"
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    weak. There was a movie about a politician being blackmailed to fuck a pig, right? At least do...

    weak. There was a movie about a politician being blackmailed to fuck a pig, right? At least do it like that be creative, gay is no big deal nowadays. i bet most presidents secretly fuck little boys anyway.
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    Writing Verb for "Psst!"

    pssted seems perfectly fine, maybe even pssssssted for emphasis. I mean banged is a thing, boomed is a thing, meowed is a thing, why can't pssted be a thing too?
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    Ben™'s dumpster fire-full of abs, lewds and bewbs

    And the best thing is that author is not a furry, and never has been~!
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    Porn or Plot with porn? Where do you draw the line?

    I am now drafting a novel where there is sex almost every chapter, but it also has a plot. I don't know which author you're talking about, but it's totally possible to have both. In the end, looks at it like that. If a story has a lot of fight scenes, does it make it a martial arts manual? If a...
  17. SakeVision

    What are your thought on Monster Girl?

    pretty cringe, can have guro potential tho
  18. SakeVision

    How many times do I have to catch fire before I can classify myself as a fire hazard?

    sounds like the fire caught you
  19. SakeVision

    Writing I feel like I may have made a mistake

    it's natural, all my stories ended up longer than I anticipated.
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    im the opposite too, normal days im like i should be writing and despair cute dog tho. pig...

    im the opposite too, normal days im like i should be writing and despair cute dog tho. pig. human. dunno what that is.
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