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    Recently I've been watching ww2 movies, just to see how different actors played Hitler. Bruno...

    Recently I've been watching ww2 movies, just to see how different actors played Hitler. Bruno Ganz stands unrivaled.
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    Thanks, I knew something was fishy.

    Thanks, I knew something was fishy.
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    How to translate this swear word?

    most karens are piss poor
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    is what my villains tell to their victims to give them false hope

    is what my villains tell to their victims to give them false hope
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    Writing what's the appeal for shoujou/fujo/BL fans?

    It's the show-not-tell technique.
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    Writing what's the appeal for shoujou/fujo/BL fans?

    Write a woman, call her a man. This twink will be your mc, the self insert. Then write a dominant dude manhandle herhim roughly. Project all kinds of submissive sex fantasies into it, write how the seme pushes you against the wall and firmly holds your chin with his big, manly hand, not...
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    Please review my story. Harsh criticism is preferred

    Cringe synopsis, too much dialogue in prose, stupid video game-like attack names and mechanics. The huge breaks between some paragraphs are probably not intentional. Author's notes that don't bring anything interesting to the table. And last but not least, it's only 2 chapters so far, so I can't...
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    Writing Prompt A Yandere story but with a special twist. The Yandere also has a sense of Justice and Mercy or Strong Morals!

    Sense of justice? Most of them do. Just think how wronged they would feel if their love interest cheated on them? Some might be driven to a double suicide by this! Morals? Oftentimes, they have morals as well. They don't hurt needlessly, just when they feel hurt and betrayed. All the famous...
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    Smut with Plot or Plot with Smut?

    Smut with plot is best. For example, imagine something like Saw but it's not just gory but also sexual.
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    My great guilt.

    My great guilt.
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    What’s the difference between web novel and conventional novel?

    In theory, nothing. But the audience and the format favor endless serializing over having a whole, coherent plot.
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    Also, Kafka's metamorphosis begins with a man waking up. In his own bed, in his own room! The...

    Also, Kafka's metamorphosis begins with a man waking up. In his own bed, in his own room! The horror!
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    never ending stoooryyyy....

    never ending stoooryyyy....
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    Writing Soul and mind

    Soul, in Christian theory, is separate from the mind and the body. Mind is like being able to think, calculate and analyze stuff. It's every thought we have, including language. It's every process that happens in the brain. While the body is the physical corpus through which we exist in the...
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    I just don't do the "release" part then I can have countless novels shelved and work on them...

    I just don't do the "release" part then I can have countless novels shelved and work on them whenever I want to without the pressure of living up to readers expectations
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    I prefer pale skin to tan.

    I prefer pale skin to tan.
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    like roleplayerguild stuff

    like roleplayerguild stuff
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    tried to go back to literate roleplaying, got reminded why I quit in the first place

    tried to go back to literate roleplaying, got reminded why I quit in the first place
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    comedy porn is still porn, if 2000's 'adult' flash animations are of any indication

    comedy porn is still porn, if 2000's 'adult' flash animations are of any indication
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