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  1. SakeVision

    Structure of a Story I Want to Write. Tips?

    your block of text needs some structure, too
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    Please give me extremely harsh reviews- no i am not a masochist

    This thread is a gangbang. Keep going.
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    What draws you in?

    A semblance of well developed plot, and suffering Lots of it If I see a lengthy story synopsis that seems to be foreshadowing future events along with that "tragedy" genre and some spicy tags like corruption or conspiracy I am very likely to click on it
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    Fight scenes??

    make every fight scene a slight variation of the following formula
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    Killing POWs who just surrendered

    Idealist is the option a realist and pragmatic would choose too, if they thought about it. The goal is to paint yourself into an honorable person with good values, so that no one, not even your enemies would question that you are good and your cause is right. This would in turn draw people to...
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    Which title would make you want to click on a story? (Come give me your opinion)

    The A. Chronicles- I tasted a cock, now I'm immortal! chicken, of course
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    Please give me extremely harsh reviews- no i am not a masochist

    By the time I'm finished with you, you will be.
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    Which toilet gives you the best inspiration for writing?

    It's not up to the toilet, but how strong is the object pushing on my anal glands from the inside.
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    How do you make a good character who has a severe god-complex?

    oh, you meant how to make a well-written character with a god complex. Now I undertand. Well, that's eeeeasy. Just give them big ego and a chunk of pride and narcissistic self focus on themselves without considering the needs of others, in other words, a typical Chinese xianxia protag. except...
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    Can you please take a look at my novel and tell me what you think? It's a fantasy

    Read the blurb. STOP. Let's look at this sentence. In a faraway corner of Tellor, Susan was running from Forest's Edge, the village she spent her whole life in, entering the place she feared the most, the aptly named Beasts' Forest, one of the most dangerous areas in the world, something she...
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    How do you make a good character who has a severe god-complex?

    and she's good? oh my You can't at best you can make her fight for a good cause
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    Why the hell are you guys here!!!

    Although my favorite webnovel site is royalroad, there are occasionally good books here too, just don't look at what's trending.
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    huge brain, as expected of ben

    huge brain, as expected of ben
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    Why are you writing?

    I just had some deep thoughts about it. Until now, I was writing to make my stories like a complex and beautiful gameboard of chess, where each character is a piece and each player does optimal moves. Such gameboard would be both thought-provoking and interesting, though not necessairly...
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    The demon king is on his knees, what would you do next?

    Make him a human and enjoy slice of life with maou sama, then marry eventually
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