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I see. Well, many such occasions. For example, in high school I had a friend who on at least one occasion had a massive mental breakdown and would nonstop scream throw insults and scream some more whole break period long, ripping apart his vocal chords and telling me to gtfo gtfo GTFO #@$#$#...

what counts as dragged out? 30 minutes? 1 hour?

A cyborg in disguise. When he got stabbed with a spear, there was blood and water. Could it have been oil? Food for thought.

You can even be nothing!! though it's probably an oxymoron

and you call yourself postmodernist? all existence is meaningless. in fact, the very concept of meaning is meaningless, if you think about how fleeting it is, how fallible human perception is, and how our memories erode, our desires change, our personality changes, what was good now will be...

I don't know how to prevent that in my own story ok read the first chapter. It's such a blatant wish fulfillment, it actually made me sad, as I assume the person who wrote it is getting the opposite in their life

lol im planning a litrpg where they have cybernetic implants that let augmented people manage their health and energy levels and scan other people and objects like a video game; you might wanna do something like that if you don't want to produce full game like world

yes

I have brain damex from drugzz that makes me write weird onomatopeias like lough instead of love, or bing instead of ping, right instead of write etc. and general damage of language abilities that make expressing my thoughts with words difficult gramarrly helps but sometimes it doesn't fix...

Read them all. Not gonna lie. The style is barebones, tenses sometimes mix, heavy tell not show....None of this is bad in itself. The story is highly metaphorical it seems....I don't think the demons are literal or whatever, and I like it but.... But I have a feeling that it's literally based...

they do, and I let it happen. if the character personality dictates something to happen, who am I to force them to do something else?

Because the writers want to bend them to the plot, and don't get in their heads. It's not hard to write intelligent character, but it's hard to make the story play out exactly like you want if everyone is smart.

interesting