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  1. SakeVision

    Question about Yaoi and Yuri.

    source: I'm telling you, bro
  2. SakeVision

    I wrote the first chapter to my first smut series

    I think the author is just gay, hence he focuses on literal Guy so much
  3. SakeVision

    I wrote the first chapter to my first smut series

    Not really...for example, during my smut writing days, I used to write from the perspective of female, often she was even superposed against literal faceless men, but the focus was still on what was happening to her body, what she felt, and her internal monologues. In a similar vein, most gay...
  4. SakeVision

    I wrote the first chapter to my first smut series

    Smut fic? True, there is smut going on. But the writing style is nothing like what you expect to find in fics like these. Snarky remarks like becoming harder than tungsten are great and characteristic of the intellectual mind; but they won't make anyone reading it harder than tungsten, which is...
  5. SakeVision

    I am Writing a grimdark truly messed up book, would like some feedback, However Not about how horrible my grammar I know about that

    Now, there is such a thing as "bad grammar". That's when authors struggle with tenses or mess up plural with singular, or repeat words often, mostly cause english is not their first language, and they don't even realize they are making mistakes. This never impeded my enjoyment of any fiction...
  6. SakeVision

    What would you do in this situation?

    I'd do nothing, I'm infertile and finantially broke
  7. SakeVision

    me too

    me too
  8. SakeVision

    Toilet thoughts: Soft masculine character

    wow you messed up quick describe him getting a panic attack just before he starts feeling bad, and he pops some xanax pills to calm down as if his literal manhood depended on that
  9. SakeVision

    Writing [Tutorial] Making ROMANCE

    no, that's not it I mistakenly thought that since I'm incapable of romance, that means I'm incapable of love while in fact, I'm asexual
  10. SakeVision

    Toilet thoughts: Soft masculine character

    eh, I knew people who have such believes non ironically.
  11. SakeVision

    Writing [Tutorial] Making ROMANCE

    god dammit I lived so many years on this planet and only now I realize this
  12. SakeVision

    What does this mean

    that's "thanks for the chapter"
  13. SakeVision

    Toilet thoughts: Soft masculine character

    that's not it. at least where I grew up it wasn't like that men weren't supposed to cry not because crying is an emotion but because crying is weak and men were supposed to be strong as for other emotions... men were supposed to get angry when someone insulted them, and fight, no matter how...
  14. SakeVision

    Toilet thoughts: Soft masculine character

    ok so what you're basically saying is not that women are emotional what you are saying is that women are retarded
  15. SakeVision

    Toilet thoughts: Soft masculine character

    You've got a point. Fortunately, just as men have nowadays drugs that can increase or decrease testosterone, women have drugs that stop the menstrual cycle all together(that's how medical anticonception works). Generally speaking, I'm just grateful we live in a modern society where we have a...
  16. SakeVision

    Toilet thoughts: Soft masculine character

    check out my edit anyway, of course it has nothing to do with men being emotional. Just like having high levels of testosterone has nothing to do with being a man. Hell, you don't even need to have a penis to be a man. If you removed a penis from most men, they wouldn't stop identifying as...
  17. SakeVision

    Toilet thoughts: Soft masculine character

    source: I'm telling you, mate
  18. SakeVision

    Toilet thoughts: Soft masculine character

    natural level of testosterone for men is anything between 200 and 800 ng/dl, it's a huge spectrum and you missed my point, the point is that the more t you have, the more likely you are to show certain behaviors, because that's how t affects people, it makes them emotional and horny. riod rage...
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