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I can feel the passion in your synopsis, and the traces of editing. It's still awkward, partly sounding like you're just listing things, so if you edit it to sound less clunky, that'll help a lot. Let your prose shine through instead. The prose is very slow and pretty. It reminds me of old...

Who said give away plot? A synopsis isn't supposed to spoil anything. Just tell us the core ideas of your novel. For example. Tell us it's a story about a protagonist who happens to be a witch, interacting with a very Christian family. This is all stuff that is happening in Chapter 1, and...

And this. Is why I'm so glad I'm East Asian. :) Jumps into pile of Chinese, Japanese, and Korean sites. Because mwahahaha, I know them all!

Yeah, it happens to me too. It's best not to use it for critical feedback. I just use it to casually ping ideas back and forth and get the writing muscles moving. Then at the end, I ask AI to organize the ideas I'd just written, and then I check if they make sense myself. Sometimes I ask it to...

Eh, I don't go to RoyalRoad. I tried once. Too much LitRPG, and characters that feel more like cardboard cutouts than actual human beings. Worse, everyone just seems to be mad at each other all the time. I'm happy here. ;)

The synopsis sounded absolute fire, so I gave it a go. The beginning was beautiful. Lines were also fire, pacing was perfect. Sentence structures weren't wonky at all. It looked like the story underwent several rounds of extreme heavy duty editing. But then cut to several paragraphs after...

Ok Yeah, that's nice. I guess I was wrong. Hm... maybe I'm just more paranoid nowadays due to seeing more AI generated writing everywhere. In that case, although your writing hasn't gotten any better, I still have a better opinion of it. Because human writing can improve, but AI writing...

Eh, I don't even know what to call it. That's why I tried not to mention it in the first place. It feels like there's tone and style mismatch going everywhere, and your narrative voice shifts(?) from one to another. That, and it feels like your story knows what it wants to say, and so it...

Must have read wrong, oops. Sorry. I dunno how to edit the little writings in, so that'll be difficult. Unless they're fine with the translations just hanging under each page as text, lmao.

For example, pirated stuff that you plan to spread online. If not, then maybe. What are the novels?

Am I going crazy, or are people editing with AI...then asking for feedback? It's AI. It sucks. What feedback do you even want?

Yeah, this was my main concern. If I review a novel, it means I love the heck out of it, I just think it could be better. Maybe the pace drags in a spot. Maybe they go overly flowery. Or maybe their transitions feel abrupt. But I don't want to drag down the writer or do anything detrimental to...

My story only has three chapters right now, lol. Similar length to yours, too. And sure, leaving in the exposition is definitely a choice. It was just a minor thing anyway, and it's not badly written. ...But I'll be honest. On second read, the story looks more and more as if it were edited by...