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Yeah, I agree. It's just not easy to tell where that line is sometimes...

Oh yeah, I saw those. You gave the link to me. That's actually the very review I looked at and thought, oh, so it's okay to be mean when reviewing? Lmao. I haven't watched Naruto, so I had no idea what they were talking about. That makes me even more nervous now! Yay. Thanks for the cuddle...

Oh, god I didn't know that. That makes things all so more complicated.

I've actually been holding off harsh reviews because I thought authors would dislike them. Who wants to be suddenly pounded into a pulp when you haven't even asked for it? But I recently found a couple scathing reviews(?) written to the author, not the reader. That...surprised me. I didn't know...

I've tried to review that novel before. It felt... off, somehow, but I didn't know why, and I couldn't explain. This is perfect. It puts everything I felt into words. Yeah, I quit at Chapter 2, too. I couldn't understand what the hell was going on. I expected fricking, but then I saw something...

Do you mean like, fun edgy? Or boring edgy? Because I love edgy, and I have a whole collection of edgy babies. Eminence of Shadow wins hands down. But 'My Death Flags Show No Sign of Ending' is the most memorable. I remember thinking this was the best novel ever in my middle school phase...

Your zero work on the synopsis immediately put me off. You didn't even try to make it interesting. And what is the story about? Who knows. But you need to tell this to your readers in the synopsis—that's what it's for. Then I read the story. First of all, you need more descriptions. Every...

AI is like a blender. You try to make food. It looks weird? There's dirt? AI adds water and blends it. Until it's not noticeable. Until it looks clean. But it's textureless, flavourless, and inedible. Your food may not look pretty. But pick off the dirt, and it could be delicious.

It's a lot better. First off, getting rid of the woman was the right bet. Instead of putting focus on him being a hybrid, you put focus on him being an important figure in this lost war. So it made sense why everyone was paying attention to him. Perhaps at the time, he'd already somewhat...

First Impression: A huge block of text is the first thing I see in the synopsis. It's very intimidating. Turn into multiple paragraphs, please. And you're not telling us what is special about your story. It's about an assassin guy doing martial arts stuff, or so I assume from the tags? And...

I do not approve. But I do approve of the image. May I ask for the source?

Reviewing novels for today~ ooh, it's gonna be so much fun!^^ Lob your novels at me.

Said positive review would be scathing criticism and a one star, but sure. If you want. Edit: Except Corty. I kinda read through their novels and liked them already. And I'm too lazy to unlike(?) Unread(?) Whatever.

First Impressions: Good news: your synopsis tells everyone the plot of your story. It looks good and full of passion. Bad news: it doesn't convey the quality. It's giving me false expectations. The synopsis is very descriptive and dramatic, with long sentences. But then I open your novel, and...