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  1. StoneInky

    I half want to axe stats and turn it into a normal fantasy, but can't cuz it's too important in...

    I half want to axe stats and turn it into a normal fantasy, but can't cuz it's too important in the plot. Ahhhhhhhjj
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    I did content writing for several years in the past but... this bl novel idea had to be written. Check this out!

    First thing that comes to mind reading the synopsis; there better be a good reason why he is hiding the fact that he is an omega, and pretending to be not a beta, but an alpha. And why the male lead specifically looked for Le An, and how he knows he is an omega. You don't have to tell us what...
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    Her soul is that of an adult man, so maybe(?) It's okay? My age is in the middle(?) ...Eh. I...

    Her soul is that of an adult man, so maybe(?) It's okay? My age is in the middle(?) ...Eh. I guess I just wanna pamper her like a princess then. :blob_melt:
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    Suffering over stats. Why did I decide to write a LitRPG? Damnit.

    Suffering over stats. Why did I decide to write a LitRPG? Damnit.
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    Oh right— I forgot I'm not a minor anymore. Oops.

    Oh right— I forgot I'm not a minor anymore. Oops.
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    She looks like she's hiding a bucket of KFC under her shirt, lmao. God it's ridiculous.

    She looks like she's hiding a bucket of KFC under her shirt, lmao. God it's ridiculous.
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    Same. Tanya is waifu 100%.

    Same. Tanya is waifu 100%.
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    New Story Idea, any feedback is welcomed

    You use commas to combine sentences that should not be combined. It ruins the sentence structure and slows action. A sentence should never look like this. Edit: I felt harsh today. Sorry, lol. I just like to nitpick, you're doing okay.
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    New Story Idea, any feedback is welcomed

    I'm sorry to rain on your parade. But it sounds edgy. Not funny edgy, even. Boring edgy. I read the first chapter. The first thing that annoys me is that, when this dude is bleeding out, unconscious, this group just stands over him and has a conversation about him for sooo long. Either rush...
  10. StoneInky

    Forget the boobas- look at that spine. It looks like someone snapped it in half.

    Forget the boobas- look at that spine. It looks like someone snapped it in half.
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    I'm winning while writing another chapter of my novel, that's taking a painfully long time to pull itself together.
  12. StoneInky

    Concept of a Story: A Writer's Perspective

    And so the artists, musicians and dancers sob.
  13. StoneInky

    I found you!!! I soooooo love your novel, big fan. And the pwetty status screens. :)

    I found you!!! I soooooo love your novel, big fan. And the pwetty status screens. :)
  14. StoneInky

    I don't know why I automatically assumed the LGBTQ+ version of unicorn—

    I don't know why I automatically assumed the LGBTQ+ version of unicorn—
  15. StoneInky

    Exactlyyyyyy. Make the readers sufferrrrr. /jk

    Exactlyyyyyy. Make the readers sufferrrrr. /jk
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    Oh, then I'm sorry I plagarized them, lol. I wrote them into novels.

    Oh, then I'm sorry I plagarized them, lol. I wrote them into novels.
  17. StoneInky

    How do we know they didn't write dreams like that on purpose? Maybe God wants me to wake from my...

    How do we know they didn't write dreams like that on purpose? Maybe God wants me to wake from my dreams. Until death. Falling into the most realistic dream of all, never to wake again...
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    Don't follow your dreams

    My story plots are mostly from dreams. Especially the really old ones. I have short books written when I was 7 or 8, with whimsical, absurd, Alice in Wonderland feels, because that was how my dreams were like back then. I still use dreams for ideas. Might just be me.
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    Sadly, I've yet to awaken from reality. God is too good a writer.

    Sadly, I've yet to awaken from reality. God is too good a writer.
  20. StoneInky

    How does Envy attribute dialogue?

    In my language, (Korean), we almost never use dialogue tags, so the entire story goes on without em. If you use dialogue tags, the story gives a very 'translated from Western language' feel. But I was told English novels need dialogue tags, so I'm adding em in. A little too much, now, I think...
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