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:blob_aww: Funnily, the zombie apocalypse genre must be one of the original American contributions to world literature, but it also tells much about the American psyche. :blob_reach:
Assurbanipal_II
Assurbanipal_II
:blob_hmm: I think Lit is a combined effort as it takes much from pre existing RPGs, but you have a point ... You need a game system to get anywhere in Meow Meow Russia. :blob_reach:
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Alski
Alski
Russians might of coined the term in 2012 (apparently), but they certainly wernt the first to write it.
JayMark
JayMark
@SRB I thought LIt-rpg was about the main character being OP GG and having the PewPew big PP power, not suffering.
Sometimes I feel like making another forums account that's shrimpshady but meaner. I have been very kind on this account, and karmic balance must be restored :blob_thor:
Moo Principle #538 - In order to defeat suspected vote tampering, I'm making a last minute plea to all voters to change their vote, or vote for, @Prince_Azmiran_Myrian as the boobiest of the scribblers.
What do you think about a children's fairy tale with dark fantasy undertones as an interlude chapter?

For example, a mother tells her little daughter a bedtime story about a wolf, a rabbit, and a princess rose. This story sounds sweet to her daugher.

But, as a reader, you might interpret this story not as a fairy tale but as a dark reality that the mother or other characters in the story might have experienced.
I forgot to turn off the stove while mom was gone. She is now cursing at my whole bloodline.
I just dropped a chapter of my story and I’m trying to improve my writing 🖤

I’d really love feedback on:
– pacing (does it feel slow or rushed?)
– characters (do they feel real?)
– emotional impact (did anything actually hit?)

Be honest, I can take it 🙂

When silence learned to speak
14 out of 17 respondents (currently) agree that character emotions need to be narrated through showing, rather than telling by mentioning raw emotions (sad, anxiety, etc).

Authors can narrate emotions organically (by showing) through body language, psychological reactions (tears, nausea, etc), action, dialogue, and atmosphere in a scene.

The goal is to make the reader experience the emotion with the character.
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