CountVanBadger
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This is for a book I haven't started working on yet besides making notes for future use, and if I'm smart it'll stay that way for a long time. But I've developed a magic system for my potential-future-WIP pirate isekai story. More importantly for this thread, I've developed a counter for that magic system and I want to run it past some people to see what you think.
So, first, the magic system itself: Sirens, and people with siren ancestry, can speak the Hymn. Words (or Lyrics) in the Hymn are the true names of things, encompassing everything about what that word is, has been, and will ever be, and speaking them gives you power over that thing. There's a whole thing about them carrying around Hymnals that absorb knowledge of the Hymn because just memorizing it would eat away at people's sanity, and the Hymnals will put their users through trials in order to learn new Lyrics, but that's not important here.
So, how do you counter a magic system that, at its core, revolves around sound? With silence. (Warning: this is where it gets weird) The people who aren't able to use the Hymn have discovered a sound frequency that actually absorbs other sounds, and have made what are essentially giant tuning forks that vibrate at that frequency. One tap of their giant tuning fork, and all sound in a certain area (depending on the fork's size) instantly disappears. And if a Siren can't audibly speak their Lyric, they have no power over it.
So...what do you think?
So, first, the magic system itself: Sirens, and people with siren ancestry, can speak the Hymn. Words (or Lyrics) in the Hymn are the true names of things, encompassing everything about what that word is, has been, and will ever be, and speaking them gives you power over that thing. There's a whole thing about them carrying around Hymnals that absorb knowledge of the Hymn because just memorizing it would eat away at people's sanity, and the Hymnals will put their users through trials in order to learn new Lyrics, but that's not important here.
So, how do you counter a magic system that, at its core, revolves around sound? With silence. (Warning: this is where it gets weird) The people who aren't able to use the Hymn have discovered a sound frequency that actually absorbs other sounds, and have made what are essentially giant tuning forks that vibrate at that frequency. One tap of their giant tuning fork, and all sound in a certain area (depending on the fork's size) instantly disappears. And if a Siren can't audibly speak their Lyric, they have no power over it.
So...what do you think?