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I'll check it out. It's been too quiet on my side of the internet.

Even good decisions can have bad consequences. (I actually write a small moral that's specific for each Act. This one is just the main idea.)

Cutting out redundant words and phrases during a second editing session is the best way to slim down your work. Look for any tautologies like "well-liked and popular" or "a pair of two." Descriptors that start with "more" or "very" can be exchanged for the proper comparative or superlative...

Aside from the technical stuff (grammar, spelling, etc.), my main strengths are detail, dialogue, and humor. I'm also good at world building in a way that feels more grounded in reality. This means I try to make every character and location unique since I don't leave a lot of room for...

D&D Beholder, right? Thank you, Google. I've tried D&D over Discord, and it's just not for me. Maybe it's because I had a bad group or because I'm used to more clear-cut storyline. It can't be enjoyed unless you have really patient friends with a lot of time to kill.

Damn... I thought cats together strong? This is pretty good feedback. All kinds of harem are pretty done to death, in my opinion.

Ohhh... Yeah, not feeling it. Although, this could because your brute wasn't fleshed out prior to this encounter. You have to remember the limitations of text versus an animated show. The reason that works in the clip is because you could hear and see the emotional depth on screen due to the...

"Conquest confiding in invincible?" I have no idea what you mean by this. If you meant "overconfident" than the best answer I can give is "yes, but not really." When you said the brute chose to go hand-to-hand instead of pulling out the sword, that was the only part.

Tfw you completely forgot about ArtFight and are now too busy to make any attacks...

I'm interested too. Hopefully you will actually get back to me unlike the last guy

My God, where do I begin... For starters, your format is very fragmented, pun intended. The short and often incomplete sentences you use are not creating the wham-bam vibe that I think you're going for. There are also a few spelling errors, for example: jewelry. Second, the dialogue stinks...

I've been putting off this poll for a while, but then I realized I'll get fewer responses the longer I wait. For the record, I love all of these equally and enjoy pretty much everything. So, my fanfiction, Heroines* has begun to become a little too packed. To get some focus and bolster my...

Not a cake, sexuality is unimportant, small enough to be held in hand and shoved into a breadbox, would lose to a witcher despite them not knowing it exists, and knows when you say nether. Not the most helpful tidbits of information Does it physically exist in real life?

Ever fight a witcher?

Species 8472. In short, xenophibic tripods from another dimension who can work together to make a Death Star laser.

I'm resonably sure the blurb can't be formatted, but I could be wrong

Side-boob, I guess?