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  1. MasterY001

    Interactive Sci-Fi: You Decide What Happens Next

    I'll check it out. It's been too quiet on my side of the internet.
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    What is the moral message of your novel?

    Even good decisions can have bad consequences. (I actually write a small moral that's specific for each Act. This one is just the main idea.)
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    Writing Any tips not to make slow-burn a yapfest?

    Cutting out redundant words and phrases during a second editing session is the best way to slim down your work. Look for any tautologies like "well-liked and popular" or "a pair of two." Descriptors that start with "more" or "very" can be exchanged for the proper comparative or superlative...
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    As a writer, what do you feel your greatest strengths and weaknesses are?

    Aside from the technical stuff (grammar, spelling, etc.), my main strengths are detail, dialogue, and humor. I'm also good at world building in a way that feels more grounded in reality. This means I try to make every character and location unique since I don't leave a lot of room for...
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    In that case, I'd stretch those ten chapters out a little. For me, ten chapters can last at...

    In that case, I'd stretch those ten chapters out a little. For me, ten chapters can last at least three months. Keep in mind ten chapters for me is more than twice the number of word it is for you.
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    What media do you enjoy?

    D&D Beholder, right? Thank you, Google. I've tried D&D over Discord, and it's just not for me. Maybe it's because I had a bad group or because I'm used to more clear-cut storyline. It can't be enjoyed unless you have really patient friends with a lot of time to kill.
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    2000 words every 6 minutes? 20000 words an hour? That's way more than anything I'm capable of.

    2000 words every 6 minutes? 20000 words an hour? That's way more than anything I'm capable of.
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    What media do you enjoy?

    Damn... I thought cats together strong? This is pretty good feedback. All kinds of harem are pretty done to death, in my opinion.
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    wrote my first fight scene, would appreciate feedback.

    Ohhh... Yeah, not feeling it. Although, this could because your brute wasn't fleshed out prior to this encounter. You have to remember the limitations of text versus an animated show. The reason that works in the clip is because you could hear and see the emotional depth on screen due to the...
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    wrote my first fight scene, would appreciate feedback.

    "Conquest confiding in invincible?" I have no idea what you mean by this. If you meant "overconfident" than the best answer I can give is "yes, but not really." When you said the brute chose to go hand-to-hand instead of pulling out the sword, that was the only part.
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    Artfight 2025

    Tfw you completely forgot about ArtFight and are now too busy to make any attacks...
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    Will each chapter be 4000 words long?

    Will each chapter be 4000 words long?
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    Looking for Authors!

    I'm interested too. Hopefully you will actually get back to me unlike the last guy
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    wrote my first fight scene, would appreciate feedback.

    My God, where do I begin... For starters, your format is very fragmented, pun intended. The short and often incomplete sentences you use are not creating the wham-bam vibe that I think you're going for. There are also a few spelling errors, for example: jewelry. Second, the dialogue stinks...
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    What media do you enjoy?

    I've been putting off this poll for a while, but then I realized I'll get fewer responses the longer I wait. For the record, I love all of these equally and enjoy pretty much everything. So, my fanfiction, Heroines* has begun to become a little too packed. To get some focus and bolster my...
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    20+ Questions

    Not a cake, sexuality is unimportant, small enough to be held in hand and shoved into a breadbox, would lose to a witcher despite them not knowing it exists, and knows when you say nether. Not the most helpful tidbits of information Does it physically exist in real life?
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    20+ Questions

    Ever fight a witcher?
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    What strange creatures have you found in mythology, legends, or depicted historically?

    Species 8472. In short, xenophibic tripods from another dimension who can work together to make a Death Star laser.
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    Can you include links to Suno songs in your novel’s summary?

    I'm resonably sure the blurb can't be formatted, but I could be wrong
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    Why is my cover being rejected?

    Side-boob, I guess?
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