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  1. MasterY001

    POVs?

    I'm going to echo something someone else on the forum said. For the record, I'm paraphrasing: "First person is often used as a crutch for people who don't know how to use third person limited. It doesn't add any immersion, only confusion due to the constant use of 'I,' 'me,' and 'my.'" As for...
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    Thank you random citizen!

    I have a whole new part of my main story in development that I plan to release along with a new hand-drawn cover (thank @WhiteFeather for inspiring that decision despite radio silence). However, it's hard to stay in the satirically nihilistic and politically cynical mindset that inspired...
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    A loving tip for people owned by cats... *^^*

    Luckily, I'm going to be home by the end of the month. I also went to a cat café while I was here, and that helped me cope.
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    A loving tip for people owned by cats... *^^*

    I do this to my cat all the time. She just stares at me then goes back to licking herself. I'm in Japan right now too so this post made me a bit homesick
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    What Are Some Parallels you Have Done?

    I do a lot of these, but my favorite parallel characters of all time are T'Challa (Black Panther) and Erik Killmonger. Both of them are fatherless which shaped their beliefs. Both of them hold the world responsible for injustice against them and black people in general. The difference is that...
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    Sees Chiori PFP. Follows. Leaves.

    Sees Chiori PFP. Follows. Leaves.
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    Was reading some blurbs from the trending list, and wtf?

    The former, most likely.
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    Was reading some blurbs from the trending list, and wtf?

    Even the title is grammatically wrong smh...
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    Was reading some blurbs from the trending list, and wtf?

    Can you provide some examples? I need a laugh right now.
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    What is after the vastness of space?

    Based on my understanding of quantum mechanics, the thing beyond space is more, slightly different space. And the thing beyond that is even more, even more different space.
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    What do you favor most in attack?

    Speed. Just spray and pray and the other three won't matter as much.
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    Does a harem half to be romantic?

    If it's 2 girls, it's either a love triangle or a menage a trois (mini-harem) depending on context
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    Is This Clear and Easy Enough to Understand?

    I recommend that you remove the member and follower count at the top since it's redundant. You should also remove the "only for personal reading" part under "Benefits" for the same reason. By asking people not to distribute your work, it implies it's for personal use only. The third bullet...
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    Is This Clear and Easy Enough to Understand?

    It's clear enough to understand what you're offering. ~8/10. I could recommend some changes to make it more professional-sounding, but I'm not sure if that's what you want.
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    Human vs Nonhuman MCs?

    Where's the "both" button? I like stories that feature both regularly in leading roles.
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    Writing In response to all the recent cynical posts...

    Well, golly heck! Gosh mother-fudging darn it!
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    Writing In response to all the recent cynical posts...

    And, I think I'll delete this thread now... Followup question: how do I delete this thread now?
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    Writing In response to all the recent cynical posts...

    Iste nihil de Latine scit. Pessimus est.
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    Writing In response to all the recent cynical posts...

    Spero eum cruciabunde morari. (My vocabulary is super rusty, smh)
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    Writing In response to all the recent cynical posts...

    I have six years of Latin classes under my belt. So, I feel you.
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