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Think about what you're trying to say with the fight scene. Action sequences can be a great way to show character, background, growth, or regression without a single line of exposition. Does the meek one suddenly go feral? Why? Just how deadly is your heavy hitter? Are they happy about it...

Both in the sig. Enjoy and please let me know what you think!

It's not actually in the story yet, but I realized it sounded too much like an Isekai title to not post it: "My wife is a thirteen-billion-year-old sun with a congenital chill deficiency and an incurable case of the zoomies."

Dialogue, hands down. Specifically my deuteragonist, she's my id and gets to say all the things I want to say.

I'm pretty late to the thread but I thought I'd throw my hat in. I think the books in my sig align well with what you mentioned in the OP: soft, cute romance - this is mostly subtextual, but what's there is pretty cute comedy with deadpan humor - I learned my sense of humor from Pratchett...

You hadn't, but thank you! I was definitely going for a certain look, I'm glad you like them.

I did, but they're fairly straightforward. Both books in the sig below.

It's all in how you use the feather: Mature - She danced for her lover with feather fans Adult - She straddled her lover on a feather bed Smut - She teased her lover's body with a feather BANNED - That chicken has seen some shit

My 6-year-old declared it the "best Christmas ever". Also I woke up to 22 random new views, which is a pretty notable day for me.

Over 200k words here, same boat.

If it wasn't for the bots I wouldn't have any conversations. #Clankers Need Love Too #Why thank you Skynet

"Sex gauntlet". I'm picturing either two rows of people beating someone with dildos or a glove with some interesting finger attachments.

I use a D&D battle map + minis to help me write fight scenes so I can keep track of who is where and doing what. I feel like I'd need something similar to keep track of who is on what and doing whom in this scenario. The real problem is the canon orientations. I have two constipated disaster...

Ohhh...sucks to be them I guess. "Algorithm" is an ancient arabic word for "wild-ass guess". True story. That's so sweet that you think anybody listens to me. Love that for us.

Woke up this morning to see this on the referral stats for Break Through: To be clear, there are no threesomes in this book nor is it tagged with "threesome" so IDK how that even happened but someone had a disappointing read.

This post sucks, mine are waaaaay better now gimme them internet dollars.

The experience of the deafening, gaping, cavernous silence after talking into the void and hearing nothing back. But then again I haven't been mobbed either so I guess it could be worse?