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  1. Yiphen

    Expression of affection

    Ha! It's not like I enjoy seeing my friends at school or anything, and it's not like there's a quarantine going on right now. Hahaahahahhaaahhaahhaahhahahhahahahahahahahhahahah. *Sadness*
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    What kind of reader are you?

    I binge-read good novels, almost instantly drop bad novels, and pretend to binge read mediocre novels only to drop them the moment I reach the end.
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    The Quote Depository

    "A: 'I want a hot drink' B: 'I need to pee' B: 'We share a common interest' A: 'No, we do not.'" -Some manga "I need to be fucked by something other than my life" -Miu Iruma
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    Do you like to use brain when reading?

    I have this habit where I like to use my brain when reading stories. It's not enough to go full congressman on them, but enough to say "did you just try to tell me 2+2=5?"
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    Anyone minds writing me a review?

    Fix your grammar. Also sentence structure. Also probably a lot of other things that you just haven't noticed.
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    I'm new here and i'm writing my own story

    So, some basic advice because I don't care enough to give a detailed analysis: Re-read your novel and try to pick apart every single thing that turns you off. If you can't find anything, read a good novel on Royal Road and compare it to yours. If you still can't find anything wrong, I still...
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    Writing a horror story for the sake of "shock value"

    Some of them are pretty terrifying and some just miss the mark. If I had to say, I'd imagine them as a "Keep that night light on for the next week or so" button. EDIT: I just read flucket's post and his opinion is probably better than mine.
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    Suggestion regarding quest/items

    If the novel isn't that serious, include a Potion Efficacy Potion, Wrathful Rapier, Bolsterous Bulwark, and Protective Platemail.
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    What is your Writing Obsession?

    My writing obsession is to have a novel with characters as realistic as possible, placed in incredibly fantastical situations. One example would probably be the little nuances of their speech and character. Although the novels I've read where people have these incredibly smooth conversations, it...
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    Anyone consider writing a Chaotic Neutral/True Neutral MC?

    I think a nihilist fits pretty well overall with what you're looking for.
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    What kind of writing style do you have?

    I'm fumbling around with a writing style hopefully similar to The Hunger Games right now.
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    Writing Prompt Ajin: Demi Human

    I'd consider myself a slightly-less-violent, underground version of Sato.
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    Character Ideas (V 2.0)

    The characters described aren't currently intended to be the major focus of the novel. I wrote their backstories as a way to explain their general motivations when interacting with others and wanted to see if they were believable. Ok, so now that I look at it again I probably should change...
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    Writing Prompt You saw someone who ran away after owning you money!?

    Well, if they're drunk then it would be pretty easy to convince them that they owe me money, and proceed to take their wallet or something.
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    Writing Prompt Ajin: Demi Human

    Well, the first thing I'd do after escaping is to go to a different country (duh). Or, maybe not. The preferred destination would be the USA. After that, I'd take advantage of my immortality to increase my pain tolerance (through completely non-sketchy means) and figure out how to work with my...
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    Other sites

    My current plan of action is to have a soft-release on ScribbleHub where I refine and rewrite my story however much I need to. When I feel it's ready, I'm gonna shove it off the deep end into RoyalRoad and watch it get razed. After the cleansing, I'd be more confident to slowly distribute it to...
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    Character Ideas (V 2.0)

    Bump: Version 2.0
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    Little question to the community.

    I saw those lines and thought of the SpaceX satellite photobombing
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    Do you finish your novels, then post each chapters weekly? Or do you immediately post whenever you finish a chapter?

    I think its better to post it at consistent times. If something happens, having a pattern for when you post it would let you just shift your schedule to make up for it. If you post it as soon as you finish, I'd assume there wouldn't be any backup chapters for emergencies. *Casually releases a...
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