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  1. Peagreene

    Looking for feedback on tone & thematic clarity (completed short series)

    You said you weren't looking for grammar corrections, but I feel obliged to point out that you need to fix your dialogue formatting as it's not always clear who's speaking, and this will affect things like tone and theme. Is this a bad thing? Why would he need to let her go? Why didn't she...
  2. Peagreene

    Seeking Feedback for my Story: I guess I'm finally ready to ask

    Thank you for taking my feedback with good grace! I have to say: don't outsource the work of becoming a writer to AI. It won't teach you well, it's a computer that learned through stealing the work of real writers. Learn through studying books you love, or by reading books on the craft of...
  3. Peagreene

    Seeking Feedback for my Story: I guess I'm finally ready to ask

    I skimmed your prologue, but it wasn't the kind of thing I like to read so I won't be reading further, but I do have some feedback. First off, you switched tenses a lot between past and present. Here are a few examples: You use a lot of ellipses, so much that they become quite...
  4. Peagreene

    Frequently Asked Questions

    Oh man, that sucks so hard. GenAI is such a grim business. Thanks for explaining! I'll report the users.
  5. Peagreene

    Frequently Asked Questions

    I received two different PMs saying "I have a few ideas I would love to share with you if you’re interested. Which platform would you prefer for chatting?" Is there a way to report spam? (Also what's the point of this? What do they do once you're on another platform?)
  6. Peagreene

    Welcome thread for the newbies!

    Hello ScribbleHubbers! I'm Peagreene/Pea/Parker, my pronouns are they/them, I like to crochet and sew and watch birds. I love low fantasy stuff - some of my favourite authors are Stephen King and Robin Hobb. I love a blend of contemporary setting with magical or supernatural or horror details...
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