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  1. Peagreene

    If you ever think a character's neuroses are unreasonable - as a child I was anxious about bread...

    If you ever think a character's neuroses are unreasonable - as a child I was anxious about bread flour.
  2. Peagreene

    the whole thing "AI does all the work," is a myth and a lie here's why

    Nah dude. Writing isn't just the developmental stuff. Prose is an art form in itself.
  3. Peagreene

    @Nolff The Secrets of ScribbleHub have now been revealed to me.

    @Nolff The Secrets of ScribbleHub have now been revealed to me.
  4. Peagreene

    @AliceMoonvale why the long face

    @AliceMoonvale why the long face
  5. Peagreene

    @Alski What do you want to happen to the pot plant?

    @Alski What do you want to happen to the pot plant?
  6. Peagreene

    Man Jack; The Jack-Off; The Jackening; 2 Jacked 2 Furious; Jacking Off: Electric Boogaloo.

    Man Jack; The Jack-Off; The Jackening; 2 Jacked 2 Furious; Jacking Off: Electric Boogaloo.
  7. Peagreene

    @Nolff What's a Jaymark?

    @Nolff What's a Jaymark?
  8. Peagreene

    Competitive straightforward biased blunt reviewer here

    Sick, thanks dude.
  9. Peagreene

    Time to post a story about jacking off.

    Time to post a story about jacking off.
  10. Peagreene

    Local Monsters Club

    My town has stories about the local family who burned things down to claim on the insurance, but those are all sadly true.
  11. Peagreene

    Should I quit writing?

  12. Peagreene

    The misfortune of Ai writing style

    I'm a simple guy: I see AI, I vomit.
  13. Peagreene

    Offering feedback on your first chapter

    Nice opening. Is this the angel? Not immediately clear. I'm wondering why she doesn't acknowledge him or respond? What does she gain by staying silent? I don't love how clunky this exposition is. I'd like more internal detail on what's prompted this change. End the dialogue with comma...
  14. Peagreene

    Competitive straightforward biased blunt reviewer here

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2176067/a-womans-desire/ https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2176004/the-impossible/ Have away, Jaws.
  15. Peagreene

    Opinion on romance in my story

    Exactly. It's degrading to both parties to think that friendship can't happen. I could go on a whole soapbox rant about how our society doesn't value friendship in the way it values romance, but tldr; it's real shitty to talk about being "just friends" like friendship is a consolation prize that...
  16. Peagreene

    Pizza crust stuffed with tomato sauce is king.

    Pizza crust stuffed with tomato sauce is king.
  17. Peagreene

    Opinion on romance in my story

    This is why I fucking hate When Harry Met Sally.
  18. Peagreene

    Writing Does NOT Equal Endorsment!

    Some write to receive hate, some to tell a good story.
  19. Peagreene

    Offering feedback on your first chapter

    Dude, what :blob_joy: To be fair, you're not wrong, I did work as a slush pile reader and then freelance editor for a lit agent and a couple of publishers.
  20. Peagreene

    If you like the Spirit soundtrack, this version is always my jam for getting inspired.

    If you like the Spirit soundtrack, this version is always my jam for getting inspired.
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