if you google search "recursion", you get "Did you mean recursion?", even though it's spelled correctly. That's because recursion means to do something again.
I do a rough outline of events for the arc and then let whatever I come up with dictate the direction of the remaining arcs. Oftentimes, that means my final product is very different than my planned version in the details, but that's what makes it fun. Just looking back on how much my ideas have...
You can have the HP decrease proportional to the amount of damage dealt to the person instead of a set amount. Also, normal people can already live for a few minutes with a destroyed heart so that wouldn't make sense. Instead, try instant death if the character gets decapitated or other fatal...
I noticed my writing style changed a lot even though it's only been 4 months. As I go back to edit my earlier chapters, I feel that I really didn't go into much detail back then and my sentences are choppy.
You also have to consider that people don't have to read your chapters to count as views. As long as they click on your book link, it counts so the number of people actually reading it might be in the single digits.
1. Super high and seeing things
2. Some bs where the laws of physics are wrapped
3. It's an alternate world so you can say what ever you want. As long as you don't explain too much, no one will question it.
4. Maybe the mc just has a weird way of percieving the world?
Reverend Insanity
Warlock of the Magnus world
Reincarnation Paradise(if you feel like reading machine translated)
All Chinese novels so they are long, but that's what you are looking for.
How about I throw a shit ton of salt at her? Water has some saturation point where it can't absorb anymore so that would be a huge hindrance. As for how, you can figure that out.
1. You can go into extremely gruesome details. Make it so detailed that the reader can picture all the ugliness.
2. Suspense: Don't reveal everything. Tell the story from how the character experiences it instead of an omniscient view. Bonus points if you incorporate an unreliable narrator for...