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Okay lets go! Name/Nickname you want us to call you Madman will do, I find it fitting as yes... I am a bit crazy but in a good way. Hobbies/interests Computers/tech/science Genres you read often/tags you often look for Science fiction, sometimes fantasy, crime and horror Your favourite...

Join the demon lord, why not?

Devon, GET THE TABLES!

So anyhow let me talk about this project, its history and hiccups as it's been a bumpy ride for this story: I have always had an interesting imagination, from childhood to adulthood my brain likes coming up with unique twists on ideas and such. Project TBX is such an idea and is my oldest one...

Yeah, I mean my autism superpower is that I soak up information like a sponge, and I am a bit of a savant because of it especially with stuff like computers.

My favorite one from the movie "Mystery men" I can turn invisible, but only when no one is looking at me.

I would have to shoot myself quite frankly, I already have bad sinus issues and allergies. Depressing? Yes but man I hate allergy season with a passion and that's only with one nose.

I disagree, for me a lot of my characters have an aspect of myself that I explore from their eyes thus I become one with my characters and my characters become one with me. Its how I give my characters humanity. Also, one can have contradictory characteristics without it being bad writing for...

Yeah I do try, mind you I am (mostly) a functional adult here, I can cook, clean and everything. I mean yes I live with my parents at the age of 39 but I more take care of them then they do me. The only thing they do for me is drive as I feel unsafe behind a wheel, too many crazies on the road...

Good to know, I will go with that then. Now any other possible places of improvement do you think? Again I am aware of a few quirks, but a second pair of eyes don't hurt :D

Well the sad truth is... there's really no such thing as originality anymore. The well has dried up, the seas are empty and all the fish are dead. However instead of that letting you down turn that into an advantage. Put all your favorite tropes together and have fun with them! Write what...

Hey here is a revision to my opening to my story: On the other side of our galaxy orbiting a gas giant is the Earth-like moon of Lapinia, the home to the Lapinans, a race of technologically advanced humanoid rabbits. However, like us they face issues such as famine, bigotry, disease, crime...

A viable solution actually, I could work with that. Again I was trying to cook up for a solution to a problem outside my control. I mean yeah I still may want to keep a few more bits to my opening you omitted, but I could use it as a base for my revised opening. Honestly though who can blame me...

Yeah but here is a valid question: What if your story doesn't involve earth? Or Humans? Doesn't take place in our time? Harry Potter has a good opening don't get me wrong, but its still set on contemporary Earth and still has a human protagonist so doesn't need such drastic sharp world building.