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  1. MadmanRB

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    Well my problem was that yes I was trying to emulate the Star Wars opening crawl, but the thing is I had so much on my plate to put down to explain my setting, my story Etc. I mean establishing things on paper vs on camera are totally different things as camera can giver information much faster...
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    Hello! New here but have a story I would like feedback on!

    cool, thanks! And yeah that mindset is hard to get into when you get older, I never quite lost it as I have (functioning) Asperger's and still think like a teen at times. I am actually an odd bird IRL as I think like a teen, have the spirit of a child but all the knowledge of an adult.
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    Writing How do I properly portray autism in a characte and where do I even start researching this shit like god damn I can't fuck this up this shit's volatile

    Right because only cops should write cop stories or Doctors write medical stories or detectives write detective works... wait... And look I get it that autism is a sensitive subject but nothing is out of reach if well researched. As long as it doesn't play into stereotypes or how about awesome...
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    Hello! New here but have a story I would like feedback on!

    Cool, really this would be a comic or a cartoon, but I can't draw LOL! Maybe someday huh? Hopefully sooner or later as I know I am getting old and doing this because I'm bored working from home.
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    3d person view or 1st person

    Both have their advantages and disadvantages. First person can get us into the characters head and see the world from their eyes, but limits all events to the characters POV. Third person gives us a broader scope of the universe and its characters but sometimes overlooks the characters inner...
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    Well probably ages 10-14 or so as after that comes the teen romance novels, keep in mind this would be a cartoon series on the lines of Avatar the last airbender or a comic book if I could draw LOL! But I can't, so it's a story (for now) one day hope to have it a comic and a cartoon in the...
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    Hello! New here but have a story I would like feedback on!

    So here's the scoop: Science fiction for ages 7-14 is quite slim outside your normal established series like Star Wars or comic book based series like Batman or Marvel stories. My goal is to have something new and while I keep my tropes close to my chest I know I have something. So imagine...
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    Is this still a thing? If so: Project TBX: The Teknabunnies - Project TBX: The Teknabunnies Episode 1 | Scribble Hub I am writing a story for the younger folks here, an action superhero themed series featuring an alien world populated by humanoid rabbits because. Note: this story is more...
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