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Good day to you all, I hope you are all healthy and doing great. Sorry for being a bother, but I need fresh perspective, if you have time to spare. Could you please read these two chapters: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1042505-hordedoom/chapter/1093034/...

Utterly depends on the character. Take Kenshiro, for example. Barely struggles to win a fight, but he is humorous: And ten times more interesting and complicated than the most OP revenge protagonists. It's not the power, it's not the struggles, it's how you shape a character that matters.

Good day to you. Before we continue, please bear in mind that I am still a very bad writer and have much to learn. Take my words with a grain... a bag of sand. With that out of the way...

To be honest, all I want is to write a book that other people like. You know, to have a fandom that I can keep writing for and that will discuss my novels. The rest (fame, money, etc.), don't hold much relevance for me.

It's the spinning motion. A guy explained it to me once, but I don't remember the details.

Awesome. I like the first and fifth pictures the best.

I enjoyed NOBUNAGA'S AMBITION: Sphere of Influence. But it is a strategy game. Which genre do you like?

Thank you. That is something I was afraid that I had lost that strength of mine (mainly because the workload in RL increased and I had to slow down the pace of releasing chapters). I had made many mistakes in the story. One of my biggest mistakes is Brood Lord, the main bad guy for the MC. I...

Sorry about confusion. I failed to create an interesting story to attract many readers, but I still owe it to those who read it to finish it. And I also write it to improve myself. The Gilded Horde (Khans, Drozna, and so on) are the antagonists of the story, while the Reclaimers (Wolfkins...

Thank you for your kind offer. Here is my story: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1042505-hordedoom/chapter/1050298/

Good day to you all; I hope you are doing well. If you have time to kill, can you please: 1) Tell me if my writing is understandable (I am not a native English speaker, so please be harsh here). 2) If it is too dry and/or if I am overusing certain words.. 3) If I over-explain things. Here is...

Sorry to bother, but you should post a link to your novel. Unless I went stupid and somehow missed it, of course. Also, welcome to the site!

Phew, I needed to get this out of my system. Back to writing.

If that is true, then block and avoid, IMO.

Shouldn't you be happy? Your story has piqued the interest of another person. Be proud and thank that person for giving your work the time of their day, and keep improving and writing instead of stressing over nothing and getting confrontational. Everyone fails at something. Don't be so...

Thank you for the kind offer! Genre: Action URL: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1042505-hordedoom/chapter/1050298/ Feedback Level: 1 Other: I am a non-native English speaker, so if you could point out where I have used "the" or "a" unnecessarily, and give me an honest opinion on how readable...

Glitch. Just rolls of the tongue better.

Hello to all, I hope that you are doing well. One of the main problems with my writing was glacial pacing and too much showing versus telling, which dragged the plot to a halt. If possible, could you tell me if I have gotten better or worse in this department based on my latest chapter...

No, the group in question had mutated from humans, gained something, and lost something in the process. In terms of personality, they are still very much human, but their traditions and habits have been shaped differently due to the new limitation.