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The way I understand it (and keep in mind, it mostly stems from doing reviews on RR), there are two types of the System. Individual (when the MC gets access to it) and Communal (where everyone gets access to it). So upon receiving SailusGebel's advice, I have decided 'Communal is too hard and...

Thank you for the advice. But it won't be a surefire hit. Litrpg requires the creation of a system, as I learned from the review swaps. I tried to follow your advice on this and spent two days trying to craft something, but all my systems ended up being an unbalanced mess and over-explained...

This is it: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1042505/hordedoom/

Sorry to bother you, everyone, but I need advice. Admission: I am a rather dumb person with no talent and am not seeking to make money from my novels. I've been trying to write something good and was doing the regular stuff (reading, writing a set amount of words, reading material on writing...

Thanks for your offer. If I understand correctly, the chapter can be from any place in the story as long as it doesn't get confusing, right? If so, then I'd like your opinion on whether Marco and Cordi seem like friends, on the flaws in my style, and on how badly the chapter is written in...

Street urchins.

A reincarnate who hates the afterlife because their previous life was so shitty that they want to not exist. And reincarnation is like a middle finger to them, because they're sure they'll just fail again. A reincarnate who wants to find a way back to their original Earth, as they miss their...

I watched it via YouTube. Seems like a cool game; I will buy it in a few months, after several optimization patches. Sadly, it is one of these games that is awesome, but lag might ruin your enjoyment.

Thank you! I was worried that maybe my novel is complete gibberish in terms of grammar writing (I am not very smart and English is not my native language). But based on the feedback I've received, that doesn't seem to be the case. So my failure lies in my immaturity of introducing characters...

I had my apartment robbed twice. The police failed to do anything about that. Yeah, it sucks having to fix everything after that.

Here is my story: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1042505-hordedoom/chapter/1042515/ Fair warning, I am a pretty bad writer.

Honestly, it is hilarious how Bakugou, who bullied Deku and even offered him to commit suicide in the past, gets to keep his superpower, while Deku lost his power and everyone forgot about him for years. He only became needed when he gained another power, while Bakugou was praised as a top hero...

You are right, but I have tried posting to several sites and the result is the same everywhere. I want to believe that my stories aren't bad, but if I get the same result everywhere I post them, then the problem lies with me. It's me who can't write an interesting story, who can't create good...

Based on your previous work, you're doing just fine. Give it a try; you can always stop and delete it if people won't like it.

Certaines personnes ont des difficultés à apprendre. C'est pourquoi nous demandons de l'aide pour trouver une orientation ou une méthode d'apprentissage.

Sorry to bother you, but I need advice if you have time to burn. I've been writing for a little while, but I'm still suck and can't write a good story to save my life, despite wanting to write. Writing is a hobby for me, but it is irritating for me to not be able to improve. So far I have been...

Wonder of U from JJBA is an excellent bodyguard.

Thank you for your kind offer! Here is my story: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1042505-hordedoom/chapter/1050298/

Thank you for your feedback and the awesome hard work you are doing! Sorry about the mistakes in the tenses; English is not my native language, and there is still an ocean of what I do not know and do not understand. I will strive to improve my dialogue, be better at wording and separating...