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    Growing Female Character

    Once listened to the first few chapters of "The Girl from ParaWorld" which includes a System the MC uses to "grow" the way you're suggesting (her first few levels remove acne and acne scarring). The writing wasn't all that good but, if it exists anywhere as a web novel, it might be what you're...
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    How realistic does it have to be?

    William Hope Hodgeson's Sargasso Sea Stories (Which, I confess, I have only read a few examples from), Boats of the "Glen Carrig" and Ghost Pirates (both of the latter I have read) would all be good to reference for this - he goes a bit into the sailing (of ships from the late 19th Century, when...
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    2nd Person Perspective

    Campbell pulled it off in two of his stories by giving "you" memory issues, with memories coming back as the story progressed.
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    2nd Person Perspective

    Other than short horror fiction (Ramsey Cambell had some excellent examples of this), the only time I've seen second person viewpoint work is in "Choose Your Own Adventure" books or websites. Not saying it can't be done, but it seems very hard to maintain in longer fiction, unless the reader can...
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    Should I finally extend the word count of my chapters?

    With the Jack Diamond stories, I try to kind of keep up with what Raymond Chandler wrote - about 1-2k per chapter, usually about 1.5k, as a style thing. With everything else, I write what feels correct, and often go back and chop stuff in half or merge chapters if they feel "off" before (or...
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    Daily fun fact 1:Rhombicosidodecahedron

    So, you're saying a 62-sided die is possible and I do not have one yet? Clearly the universe is out of balance!
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    How many types of bastards exists according to your knowledge or experience from reading novels?

    That is pretty much a modern simplification that downplays the historical importance of the male bloodline, at least in European culture. Originally it was explicitly a child who was not formally recognized by his father, regardless of the circumstances of his birth (at least in the Germanic...
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    How many types of bastards exists according to your knowledge or experience from reading novels?

    The genealogical one is I THINK the origin of the term - it was a big deal in heraldry when a child was allowed to use the family crest because everyone knew who their dad was, even though that father refused to recognize them, either because they were the product of an affair, they were...
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    How does the best model of Toyota fare against Mitsubishi in term of reliability?

    According to my stepson, who seems to know a lot about cars, it varies wildly based on model years - but in GENERAL Toyota is the better of the two cars.
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    How many types of bastards exists according to your knowledge or experience from reading novels?

    More seriously: You have the genealogical bastard - the person not recognized by (or who does not know) who their male parent is. You have the hand-and-a-half sword, the bastard sword. You have a ruthless jerk - the 'right bastard' And you have something that has been cheapened somehow...
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    How many types of bastards exists according to your knowledge or experience from reading novels?

    Bastard Sword. Royal Bastard. Regular Bastard. Right Bastard.
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    Anything that isn't stale... Probably "Oops! All Berries" though.

    Anything that isn't stale... Probably "Oops! All Berries" though.
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    Opinions on this premise? I might write it!

    Unless you plan an ongoing webnovel so that you can log hundreds or thousands of chapters, this is always a good idea. It's usually a good idea with the webnovels too, but always a good idea for any other type of writing.
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    Fun challenge

    Twenty, thirty years ago I could have done this with minimal references (had a card with some of the more obscure ACII symbols that I made heavy use of, mostly on websites). Now I'd have to cheat to get anywhere with it!
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    Feedback/Review Swap

    Just a first impression thing - the chapters are not numbered. Fortunately, they seem to be posted sequentially, oldest at the "end" newest at the top but sometimes chapter numbers help, especially if postings wind up out of sequence (been running into that on a story I was following - for a...
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    Feedback/ Swap Reviews

    They work to get a review or feedback on a few chapters, provided you give the same. Whether they give useful information or not, whether they are snarky, straightforward, or just flummoxed, varies with reviewer. Note that in a review swap you are MORE LIKELY to get mostly or entirely...
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    Is SH becoming toxic? Or is it the situation of the current readers?

    You'll find everything here - toxic, nice, constant editor (me), people who only read if there are 20+ chapters, people who prefer 10-20 so they can catch up, people who will read first 1-3 chapters then disappear until you hit fifty. Everything.
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    Tir Na Nog story?

    So would this feature the Tuatha de Danaan (sp.?) as well, or just their land?
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    Isekai Inspirations

    Good lord - that's all nine levels of Hell in two seasons...
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    I am Back!

    Not certified, but trained by "Heckler's Online" back when America Online was a "thing"
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