it's disorienting on first glance but i'm sure there's a reader out there that will eventually get used to it or even grow fond of it.
if you ask me, it's best if you find a way to line the text with the image. it just seems like a pain in the ass to read. guess your problem now is just the...
It's fine. I didn't expect any in-depth analysis, only a general outlook from a point of view I can trust. This is very helpful too, in its own right. My attempts from before can be summarized as "winging the fuck out of it".