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had complaints about the "bowling ball" (I still prefer the term "crystal ball effect", lol) and, needed room for titling... just fooling around...

because she's a professional bowler. Its a litRPG with level ups for throwing more strikes in a row. (kidding, couldn't help it) I like how its a sort of crystal ball effect. since its for an Isekai, it somehow conveys the two world idea. And if she does something for the male gaze, then so much...

I think I finally figured out your screen name, lol. I own a DVD of the original Conan the Barbarian movie. Cool.

@JordanIda. You get it. This stuff helped kill trad pub. We get preached at and enough "teachable moments" in all other forms of every day life. Reading is an escape, from the real world. Well, it was meant to be. Don't get me wrong. You can have a theme, or something you want to say or show...

now? We're going to celebrate. So...

it is specific. I've noticed that in dreams, printed matter "changes" when you go back to look at it again. More than once, I've noticed my money in my pocket changing like that.

I personally find it annoying when I'd be reading a print paperback and I encounter the dreaded "drop in". WHen I read, I have a running movie in my head. A "drop in" is when out of freaking nowhere, this character/characters just appears. They tend to issue or cause to be issued, some kind of...

count money. put it away. get it back out and count it again. if the count is the same, if the "money" didn't turn into coupons or something weird. Its reality. Printed things change every time you look at them in a dream. The part of your brain that reads, isn't working.

hey! I'm not lactating!

its okay. I have it on good authority she's an "intimacy vampire", not the drain your blood and steal your soul kind. Maybe she played "Masquerade" one too many times.

english grammar humor, is few and far between. good job. if that isnt proof you like puns, wordplay, and are good at it? I'm a monkey's uncle. I'd bet you have some gallows humor at times in your writing, eh?

I'm late to the party. Rape. I decided a "worst case scenario" rape for a psych student getting into rape therapist work, would be the way to deal with that. I refused to have the rape "happen". I refused for there to be any titillation factor. The female is *&^%-ed up from it, and the...

Good work! (hope I look good in green, lol...)

my number one choice for writing is Monster energy. Original green, thank you very much. There's a generic energy drink that I don't mind at all. Most usually though, its coffee. MIlk is a luxury if I have it. Normal would be just sugar though. Real creamer is me spoiling myself. I get my best...

lol You know what I'm going to do? glad you asked. I'm going to start talking in three and four capital letter abbreviations. It will be gibberish, random letters. But I'm going to pretend and act all serious. I start now. SOD

I question how clear of a vision you have for your own story, when you're asking people what to do next. Hey, which character do you want me to give more screen time to? Vote on it! 911 words to the first chapter, then we vote and tell you what to do next. no comment. not my thing.

standard noir-speak. the typical noir world, is dark, dritty, and corrupt. The noir MC is a product of this blighted world.

that's a white hat hero. Yeah, I find them to be little kid comic book good guy annoying. you're describing a "noir" MC. They can be doing it because they are forced to and have no choice, out of greed, or any of a number of reasons other than just being a good hero. They will have character...

@CharlieBrown... see that's the thing. Of the two volumes? The one that isn't getting any ranking is the better performing one for views and engagement. I guess its coming up on "updated recent", or how else would they be finding it.